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Amazing. a breather. A story where side characters actually have working brains. the author is smart enough to create a smart main character. i doubt this will get noticed but incase you do give it a try. cause it might just be the thing for you

Your welcome Sir Neil, please continue writing this book and do not lose inspiration because i can assure you that people really like your books and you as an author. It may not compare to others when it comes to popularity but that is because people haven't even seen it yet i can assure you that your book is amazing and is a Hidden gem ❤️ you love dude stay safe and keep doing what you like.

author san... please comeback.. everyone misses you already.. AUTHORRRRR!!! SANNNNNNNN!!!!! DONT GIVE UP YET!! EVERYONE'S WAITING FOR YOU !! YOUR FRIENDS!, YOUR FAMILY! YOUR READERS!!! AUTHOR SAAAAAAAAAAANN! I KNOW WHAT YOU'RE GOING THROUGH RIGHT NOW AND I BELIEVE. NO! WE BELIEVE YOU CAN MAKE IT!!!!!!!!!! DONTTTTTTTT GIVEEEEEEEEEEE UUPPPPPPPPP !!!

im sorry if its a bit personal. you do have the option to not answer anything though id really love a response

so question 1: which books did you take inspiration from (although i have some guesses id still want to know) question 2: since when did you start writing this book cause dang its pretty long question 3: do you do this as a hobby or are you doing this as a career 4: do you get paid in this website? (iive always been curious bout this one) 5: how much do you get paid

SO YOU DID READ IT!! aight i got some questions for you author-san are ok with me asking? its fine if you dont want to its just me satiating my curiosity

Alright so this is my first time writing a review so bear with me ok so i will explain what i like, what i dont like and why >first of writing quality: the writing quality is good, i did not give it a five star since its not on the level of Shakespearean literature but its good so yeah >next one is story development: so must i say that the story's pacing and development is very well done. it never gets boring and will always keep you wanting to read more and know whats next [although i hated how spoiled cranberry acts its very reasonable and is actually vital to her character (just my opinion not a fact) i still hate her a bit though cause she still acts like a B] >ok third ah yes character design: ok so here it is i rated this with a crunchy 3 stars why? cause the author doesnt really care about side characters and when it comes to character description he does it very vaguely which in my opinion kinda makes it bad since you will subconsciously try and create a mental image which will not be good when this thing finally gets a manga >Fourth updating stability so this is the part where i am very understanding and thus i gave it a fat 4 cause i know how busy one can be and how hard it is to manage time >anddd finally world background: so if only there was something like a 4.5 star id rate it since its quite original... ok well except for the system but even that is different since everyone has it and the way it is used is very original or atlest ive never heard it before overall i came for the cliche otome trope but was pleasantly surprised to find something pretty good so yeah pretty much tthats all i can think about to say solid 4.2