Worst translation I have ever seen
Something with 20km bankai yeah he had Gins bankai
It’s called fanfic for a reason
I was skeptical at first but shit is actually goated. First time reading this kinda of unique Naruto fanfic. Holy creativity dude, you making Shakespeare jealous with this
What happend to his fathers mangekyou ??
I like this change actually am kinda tired of seeing uchiha or civilan dominate. Evil hokage or konoha. Like thos carefree children being children. Friends being forged
The idea is good the story is good it’s just AI style it’s so disgusting 🤢 to read. Repetitive. And the Cornell language. No emotions on the novel. It’s plain. It’s dosent store anything. Like excitement about the mc having A GOD level power. No emotions. Everything so AI. The idea is good but the AI style writing destroys it. The story is good but the writing style makes it lower and destroys it. You have good concept but As I said earlier the AI makes it hard to read same with the character design no emotions on them.
This book has been deleted.
The idea is good the story is good it’s just AI style it’s so disgusting 🤢 to read. Repetitive. And the Cornell language. No emotions on the novel. It’s plain. It’s dosent store anything. Like excitement about the mc having A GOD level power. No emotions. Everything so AI. The idea is good but the AI style writing destroys it
This book has been deleted.
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