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The same author who made Fate of Asertia. I like that the author has improved his writings even there are some things that needed to be fixed. But I believe he can improve more and besides all that, I really enjoy the story of this one and I mean it. Good luck on the WSA, author
I've read till chapter 10 and so far I like it. At first, there are too many characters that are introduced, but then I can tell which is which because they all have their own unique traits and it kinda amazing. So good job for the author and keep doing your best.
a stereotypical incident to save someone. But the way the main character resolved the problem is not bad. he knows what and what not to do.
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Fantasy · Iqfauli
a unique traits. I never thought that a fantasy novel have this kind of details of the classes compared to the fantasy novel/manga/anime I read and watched. Excellent.
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Fate of Asertia
Fantasy · Iqfauli
A nice introduction of a character. It helps to imagine what's she looks like
A woman around 30 years old, tall and slender body, with purple hair and purple eyes, with a big beautiful smile on her face. I reply,
Fate of Asertia
Fantasy · Iqfauli
Main character introduction and his family background is good. This will be useful in the future.
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Fantasy · Iqfauli
The introduction is perfect. The details of the information about an adventurer and the classes. I know by just reading the introduction that this story is interesting.
Overall, i think the story itself is really fun to read and not to mention how the author mixed both elements "you would know when you read it" together is quite fresh compared to the stories nowadays. it's a good story and no complaints from me.
HA\LF: Dead nor Alive
Fantasy · Iqfauli