Liasis

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Liasis
Liasis
3 years ago
Commented

That's a weak meteor.

Before undoing the formation, Luan manipulated the memories of the people of the Zing Clan and made them forget about Cristina's existence and think that a meteor fell on their clan and destroyed everything, killing more than twenty people, including the elders and the Patriarch.

Rise of the White Dragon

Rise of the White Dragon

Fantasy · Lruska

Liasis
Liasis
3 years ago
Posted

...Yeah it's just spam. Not sure why it was recommended as "encouraging". Literally just "hello" and "maybe hello" copy and pasted for two entire chapters.

Liasis
Liasis
3 years ago
Commented

Goodbye.

Liasis
Liasis
Liasis
3 years ago
Commented

No big deal.

Liasis
Liasis
Liasis
3 years ago
Replied to profdiem

I mean, that seems to be the point.

Liasis
Liasis
3 years ago
Commented

But snakes don't have eyelids...

Liasis
Liasis
3 years ago
Posted

I'm really enjoying this novel. It's pretty well-written and has a compelling, interesting story that keeps you wanting to read more. I'm very interested in the world development of the MC's original time and how his powers progress. And how his gaming abilities progress. Praise gamercat.

Liasis
Liasis
3 years ago
Posted

While I wouldn't call this novel bad, it's also far from the best and doesn't offer anything particularly new or interesting. That said, it's a fun read if you don't take it seriously and aren't looking for something to take seriously. I'd like to see it continued and the world expanded upon, though it also runs the risk of being even more repetitive than it already is and falling into the trap of just doing the same thing over and over again. It has potential to be great, but as is it's just okay.