It is a great work! Will you be interested in also uploading the work on other platforms?
The plot is intriguing!
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Oscar stood at the door, watching his daughter freak out. He didn't know how he hadn't noticed that they weren't alone in the room. He didn't have the guts to explain to them what had happened, he knew they wouldn't listen to him. He just walked away and went to the room he shared with Kim. I wonder if she'll ever want to share a bed with me again, much less a room.
I'm Hollow
Urban · Hannah_Bwiiza
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Eleo went completely crazy with what Oriana said and replied, "Hey, if your father sees you in my room. He's going to kill me!!!!"
MEET YOU AT SUNRISE
Urban · R_Pavi
You update very actively! Are you interested in creating new story on other platforms?
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Weapon seller in the world of magic
Eastern · Snowstar
Nice details! Are you interested in creating new story on other platforms?
Before all the cultivators were knocked out on the ground, the black-robed man from the Devil Sect had substituted his location with a shadow that assumed his clone and cultivation realm as it was the one that the pressure knocked out, the black-robed man vanished from the stadium as he headed for the Devil Sect.
GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
Urban · Lordflash
the action with conversation is just right! Are you interested in creating new story on other platforms?
Eleo went completely crazy with what Oriana said and replied, "Hey, if your father sees you in my room. He's going to kill me!!!!"
MEET YOU AT SUNRISE
Urban · R_Pavi
great narration! I love the way you describe their actions. Are you interested in creating new story on other platforms?
Ajah was able to gather a handful of customers from time to time but most of them had their business relationships terminated in conflicts or simply didn‟t come back, so he got new customers all the time. When Reuben noticed that Ajah kept a mistress, he knew that he was a lost man.
A Mechanic's Desire
Urban · Ify_Asia
Hi any thought?
Before all the cultivators were knocked out on the ground, the black-robed man from the Devil Sect had substituted his location with a shadow that assumed his clone and cultivation realm as it was the one that the pressure knocked out, the black-robed man vanished from the stadium as he headed for the Devil Sect.
GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
Urban · Lordflash