Xur_1603

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Xur_1603
Xur_1603
1 years ago
Replied to Xur_1603

For saying Alise is Pyrrha’s reincarnation is more so for Jaune to make up for that regret well also giving him a win cause honestly everyone in RWBY is really getting constant L’s it’s almost unbearable

Xur_1603
Xur_1603
1 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter. The way you make him go back in time well showing us RWBY and I’m assuming Neo are going to be there later is nicely done. Along with the twist of having ever afters realm coming to Genkai is fantastic. For a partner or partners it really depends on if it’s a harem. Freya would definitely give him the bell treatment after seeing his unique soul but like bell I don’t think Jaune would love her. I think Alise would be a good choice especially since she looks like pyrrha which means you could pull reincarnation shenanigans saying she’s pyrrha after dying.

Xur_1603
Xur_1603
1 years ago
Replied to Lord_Disaster

With the cover and it being Danmachi most likely a harem story

Xur_1603
Xur_1603
1 years ago
Commented

Pretty good setup so far I’m looking forward to how you develop the story further

Xur_1603
Xur_1603
1 years ago
Commented

+1

5. Reincarnated as Jaune Arc the title being "I'm Jaune Arc" with only the MC knowing the same as the first choice in the poll but having to be Jaune Arc as I'm writing this down because I was surprised what happened to Jaune in Vol 9 wanting me to try my take on it as someone did "I'm Ruby Rose" fanfic here with a different mindset.

RWBY: GAMER PATH

RWBY: GAMER PATH

Anime & Comics · Jovami6729

Xur_1603
Xur_1603
2 years ago
Posted

It’s pretty good so far even though the story pace is slightly slower then what I usually read. A system that encourages changing plot is great. I really hope you keep Ryo and Zero-two(I’m totally not biased I swear p.s. I know it’s harem) together throughout the whole story with no cheesy plot induced separation. The updating is a little irregular so I hope you can be more consistent but you probably got other priorities so it’s fine. I’m a little concerned about how you use the whole higher being looming threat in your story progression but I won’t judge for now cause the story isn’t that far in. Thank you for taking your time to write this novel I hope you keep updating it

Xur_1603
Xur_1603
2 years ago
Commented

Great read thank you for writing it

Thanks for tuning in to this, especially because the start was a bit rocky. This is the 1st time I've written after all. Anyways, ciao. And I will now focus on their adventures to other worlds so they can fuck shit up.

Honkai Impact: Invictus.

Honkai Impact: Invictus.

Video Games · Khay_Cee_Padua

Xur_1603
Xur_1603
2 years ago
Commented

Salem. Just imagine her reaction

Xur_1603
Xur_1603
2 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the upload The story’s good so far and the pacing is perfect for you speed of uploading. I’m curious what u plan to do with his harem though cause it’s already at 6 and the first wold isn’t over. Do you want to flush them out or make them Pokémon or both

Xur_1603
Xur_1603
2 years ago
Commented

+1