Whannmarie

Aww thank you so much. I am always glad to hear that the readers have enjoyed what I wrote

Wow just wow. There aren't many books that can leave me speechless but this one is the newest ace in the deck. I am absolutely amazed at how well you express the characters thoughts and emotions. Most writers have issues expressing emotions in regular books and yet you expressed them effortlessly and in a Martial arts book no less. The fact that the plot is complex makes me love this even more. Most books nowadays are plagued with simplistic, used up, predictable plots that leave me bored. This story had me glued to it for an hour with no breaks. It just had me wanting more and more of it. Absolutely brilliant.

In my opinion this is very well written. I find the characters to be so relatable and I love the fact that there is a lot of emotion in this particular story. Some authors write books that hardly portray emotions properly because it is quite hard to do so through words. You managed to do that beautifully and effortlessly. I am also glad that I did not once feel bored while reading this. This story really makes you want to stick to it till the end.[img=recommend]

Thank you so much for the review. I am always happy to hear that from readers as it helps me to better develop and grow especially as a beginner author. The whole dialogue thing was just to test the waters. This is my first book and I have no idea which style readers would like more so I thought I would try both and see which one readers would prefer more.

This book is absolute gold. Heck I just binged all the chapters in about half an hour. I never usually read books for that long without taking a break because it normally starts to become boring. With this book the plot is completely unique, which is a great thing because I see to many novels with overused plots these days. The grammar is absolutely amazing and I really admire the writing style it allows us as readers to get the full story in detail while also giving us insight on the characters thoughts. Absolutely amazing. I would give it a million stars if I could.

I really think this story very good and captures the reader's attention. I really liked the fact that it was well thought out and went into great details. There are a few grammatical errors and typos but that is fine of course, next time try a grammar review app to help you out with that. The story outweighs the grammatical errors and typos by far, Although I am a perfectionist, I cannot help but give this story a great review in spite of the errors. I would highly suggest this book to anyone who likes sci-fi. 1d

Thank you very much for the review darling. I will definitley take what you said into account and sorry about the suspense the next chapter will be up in about an hour. I will also add spaces just for your comfort. Remember if there are any other suggestions please feel free to let me know. What my readers think matter to me

Thank you for the review. It is always nice to know what people think. I want to make the best story possible for true fantasy lovers. The dialogue t is a new thing I wanted to try out to see what reactions it would receive so thanks for the opinion.