Superb, very interesting so far. Though, the part where it narrated the village's conflagration could use some more dramatic emphasizings. Overall, it was a good piece of work.
Hargyne— a world inhabited by brave folks and heroic warriors whom strived eachday to feel the warmth of the sun tomorrow. A world which possessed great and tantalizing potentials, counterbalanced by unmatched perils that haunted the humanity for indefinite eons. The world of swords and magic—that is, Hargyne. On one fateful day, a sixteen years old boy—Mokusei —and his childhood friend as well as his bestfriend—Yui—had been miraculously reincarnated upon their tragic death, and found themselves looking at the vast and mysterious world, with brave and dangerous adventures waiting in front of them.
Dang man, you really did a great work here.
Blood Wars: The First Bout
Fantasy · CyrixIsUplifted