Snoopy445

"Who dared to invoke my name in this chapter?"

Please keep updating this novel.

seal of approval

"As long as it is well placed in the story, I have no problem. What would bother me would be if you included too many surreal scenes in the story."

I liked the idea

As the story unfolds, the protagonist discovers that he was responsible for the death of his own family. This revelation sets him on a quest for revenge.

"To me, that would make the plot quite boring to follow, causing me to stop reading. I would prefer a middle-ground character, and for the 'bad' part, I would take inspiration from Dr. Facilier."

Chatgpt