Well, to be fair I dont have the time to continue it, Im working on other projects, but thanks for reading ! I spent a lot of time on this and im really happy that you liked it.
everything as been said, honestly if you dont want him in the story just send him elsewhere and dont bother to rewritte. A line like he want to go to ranoa but doesnt have the funds and instead of going to eris plot he goes somewhere else. But im more interested in their bonds.
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yeah I agree with this, I dont see the point of deleting him just for deleting him. He can be useful for the stories, the different pov, and he can also explore his own road of hardship, make it more interesting in the story afterward, for exemple teleport him elsewhere when the event happens than make them find each other and him with his own party. Or even when they go where eris is, you can make it so rudeus just go to another part of the family or elsewhere. This is so much better having him go his own path and you can enrich and explore even further the world than just having him erased.
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why should you limit yourself to writting him like this, you know that you can just change him bcs of the mc right ? there is no limit to your story I think.
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you said that rudeus is useless, so why remove him ? you can just let him live in the corner of the world and have him for some chap come or whatever. Or you develop him so he become stronger than canon bcs of the mc. You can also make him the main antagonist with hitogami manipulating him into thinking the mc stole something from him that would be cool too. There is a lot of potential to go with him just being there than not. I dont really see a reason to delete him just for the sake of deleting him.
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I like the one with rudeus more, the world feel more alive with him I guess, and also even if he has his default our mc can change him and thats a good thing. So rudeus for me.
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well indeed there is a lot to say and I understand totally your point of view. The thing is for me, especially if we dont have a clue about what happens after we die, considering the fact that you can just stop existing, I think its better personnally if you have the power to do it to become immortal. In the case of rudeus, he has it all, power, family, situation.
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yes but thats if you live a normal life. If you live happy and your friends and lived ones dont die too. Whats the point of dying. its the same thing with the paradise basically. and you are the strongest can do whatever there is to do. I dont think you will become insane juste because you live longer. Imagine in the past people lived up to 50, now up to 90, so double the time. But they arent insane. you see my point ? basically the downside you talk about is only if you are all alone powerless and in pain. Maybe that will make you insane. but otherwise I dont think so.
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"Yet you have failed me."
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Book&Literature · Rimanovi
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Our hero finds himself transported to the world of the Lord of the Rings a couple of years before the main plot in the body of Talion, a ranger of the Black Gate. War is near, the forces of evil are powerful and many people wish to satisfy their desire. In this pre-War of the Rings environment, Talion will have to be extra careful to create a safe haven for himself. Watch him as he fights for his dream and battles enemies that came straight from hell. ******** You don't need to know the lord of the rings to read this fic as i explain everything and i put pictures. There will be others world. i do not own the lords of the rings, neither i own the others works and caracter in this story. The pictures arent mine.41 Chs 3.4k Collections
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My minecraft world but it's connected to the multiverse !? -hiatus
What happen when a guy is getting a realistic minecraft world with everything that goes along, and in hardcore ! and what if he get a shop to buy mods and can create gates to the multiverse ? This is a story of base building/kingdom building, with adventures in other world, and a quest to become strong and free ! If you have a cover pic idea to suggest I will consider it ( dont really like this one )7 Chs 543 Collections
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Interesting Journey in the Multiverse
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Everyone has dreams and hopes. Some achievable, some not. In the end everyone follows the same path, anything can happen beyond that. Follows the protagonist in his adventures to realize his dreams in different worlds. first World : attack on titan ____________________________________________ not a waifu collector fanfic, or wish fullfilment story, there will be harem but a decent one with few girls, but later in the story. it's a fanfiction of travel in the multiverse, several worlds are planned, I'm new in writing and English is not my main language but it should be correct. I accept any kind of criticism, don't hesitate to give me advice for this fanfic. I hope you will enjoy it. I don't own any works other than my character and the ones I create. I am writing this for entertainment, i have a lot of things to learn and i hope you can help me.11 Chs 336 Collections
nah I changed plan, its only middle earth. sadly I do not have the time to continue on with my original plan for middle earth so I will bring an end to this story soon.
Hello everyone, I hope you will like this new fan fic, the beginning is done in the lord of the rings, so there will be other worlds afterwards. If you have any questions that won't spoil the rest, ask them and I'll answer if I see them.
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Anime & Comics · Tractopelle