John_Whall

John_Whall

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John_Whall
25 days ago
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I don't know where you are trying to go will this story but so far I don't think it is messed up. It's seems very well thought out and structured so I hope you can fix your plot problem soon, but if not thank you for everything you have given so far.

John_Whall
John_Whall
28 days ago
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We jumped from dec to July???

John_Whall
John_Whall
1 months ago
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great story thank you but what about stars and stripe the USA hero

John_Whall
John_Whall
1 months ago
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I love your wit I find myself smirking or outright laughing ever time I read keep it up, thank you

John_Whall
John_Whall
1 months ago
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Great concept but I’m struggling to follow along and get invested

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John_Whall
John_Whall
5 months ago
Replied to Death_panda

There are two people in the house that are constantly reading everyone’s (expect MC) mind the pictures don’t need to see the light to other people have seen them and at least one if not both have been antagontised by the MC So how long before the innuendos start

'I really should have thought better than to wish I was beautiful. Why the hell do I look like a damn ladyboy when I wear those hellish dresses. I have abs, god damn it.' Alex thought as he felt himself cry inside.

Reincarnated as Bella Swan's Brother (Twilight)

Reincarnated as Bella Swan's Brother (Twilight)

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John_Whall
John_Whall
6 months ago
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Only read the first few paragraphs and I already love it. Looking at reincarnation through the eyes of someone who rightly thinks are world is one of luxury when compared to a world of live or dead

John_Whall
John_Whall
9 months ago
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I must say you write an incredible good Luna

John_Whall
John_Whall
10 months ago
Replied to Hope315

And the harvesting of meat and things??

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