Too much obscene language!!!!
First of all your a great author to have someone like me hooked on HWY. I'm not a fantasy person I love mysteries, action, mafia, adventure and good old romance. But I just love how you are able to create such a fantastic book with so many different things happening at the same time and most importantly, the writing of ideas just flows into each other. So please don't sell yourself short. You're one of the few writers that I can actually see myself completely a book with almost 1000 chapters and not getting bored!!!
How can it be fair for the reader to have to pay a second time for the duplicated chapters!? Furthermore, due to this the story is not flowing smoothly and has become a task to read. It's now not a pleasure to read it. Therefore, I highly doubt that I'll recommend this book to anyone
it's not right to have to pay for so many duplicates
I'm a teacher and the gender mistakes are too much and can be confusing to follow at times.
The storyline is good, but there are too much repetition giving tge pov of both male and female leads. I just skim through them....
I'm sorry to say this, but this is the worst book I've read in all of my 50plus years!!!! There's no flowing of the story!!!
Cruel Destiny
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