agnozan

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Becometh from words forewritten, tis I and him and us.

2021-02-08 Joined Malaysia
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agnozan
agnozan
2 years ago
Replied to thesmoker

thank you for following the story, i really appreciate it... it's in the system, but it's not within the bracket... is just a matter of writing formats limit... truthfully, i want to put the system in tables but there's no such option, so i have to allocate which uses this type of brackets and which uses others... there's like only 3 types of bracketing available on my keyboards, and the rest i have to search online huhuhu ... thank you btw for pointing it out

[Daily Mission : Rescue the Civilians] completed!

Calibre Prognosticatorum

Calibre Prognosticatorum

Sci-fi · agnozan

agnozan
agnozan
2 years ago
Replied to chaemi_love99

thank you for the review, i have in mind to increase more screentime of the female lead, but that would have to wait. I'll be sure to maintain the quality of my writing

agnozan
agnozan
2 years ago
Replied to shanekenoau

thank you for the review, I'll try to stay consistent with the quality of my writing and hopefully be able to meet everyone's expectations

agnozan
agnozan
2 years ago
Replied to Creckon

Thank you for following my work, really appreciate it. 😍 Btw i didn't intend to write the lieutenant lady as a yandere hahaha 🤣🤣 I'll try to write her character in a better way in coming chapters...

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Calibre Prognosticatorum

Calibre Prognosticatorum

Sci-fi · agnozan

agnozan
agnozan
2 years ago
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🤣 lmao...

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Calibre Prognosticatorum

Calibre Prognosticatorum

Sci-fi · agnozan

agnozan
agnozan
2 years ago
Replied to chaemi_love99

no it wasn't, i made it myself on the spot

agnozan
agnozan
2 years ago
Replied to SliverLance

Would you consider using Latin words for Demon ranks? For example the rainbow colour + Latin word for fire 'ignis' 1. Rubrum Ignis 2. Luteum Ignis 3. Flavum Ignis 4. Viridum Ignis 5. Caeruleum Ignis 6. Indicum Ignis 7. Abyssum Ignis (Hyacinthum sound like a flower name, lol) For the extra "Demon Lord" make it 8. Abyssum Dominus Ignis or Abyssal Lord's Fire However, I'm not sure whether the naming would fit into your world. But even if it doesn't fit, you can say that the demons actually came from another world where it had Latin-like language origin...

agnozan
agnozan
2 years ago
Commented

I really like reading worldbuilding settings, and this one written is very interesting...there well-defined distinction between warrior levels...and that there's only one True God is very appealing story element. keep up the good job and I hope the author would write more auxiliary chapters...like on the spirit beasts, demon ranks etc...[img=recommend]

agnozan
agnozan
2 years ago
Posted

Writing Quality is a 4-star because although there's a wide use of jargons and gaming slang terms, there are a few typos here and there, and the sentence flow sometimes felt a bit awkward; I tend to drown during writing so I sometimes missed those silly mistakes. Even for Chapter 1 I spent 1 whole day trying to proofread it myself, which took a lot of time from me writing. Stability of Updates is a 3-star because so far, I only have two major story arcs planned which would amount to 50+ chapters. I'll however, am confident to deliver at least 1 chapter a week, as there's another title I'm working on as well. Story Development is a 5-star because so far, there is a logical sequence of events take happened one after another, and I try to reduce using plot armor as much as I could consciously, and even if there is a plot armor, I try to make it not OP and can be countered. Character Design is a 4-star, I based the MC of a 30-years old man with no career IRL. Thus, he had a very .old-man vibes to him, but his personality was very immature because he spent his leisure time playing video games with people 5-10 years younger than him - a typical man-child. I am already planning to introduce another key character in the coming chapters. World Background is a 5-star because I actually based the story setting from a recurrent nightmare I had when I was a child. It was so traumatic that I remember vividly the details of that world. I really want to describe the world that I saw in my dream. P.S. I am the author of Cal.Prognos and I personally have a few opinions on this work of mine.

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  • Calibre Prognosticatorum original

    Calibre Prognosticatorum

    Sci-fi ACTION SYSTEM SUPERPOWERS TRANSMIGRATION SURVIVAL LEVELUP APOCALYPSE VIDEOGAME NPC

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  • ex Mechanicus (WSA 2022) original

    ex Mechanicus (WSA 2022)

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG MYSTERY SUPERPOWERS BETRAYAL KINGDOMBUILDING HISTORICAL MYTH

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  • ex Mechanicus (discontinued copy) original

    ex Mechanicus (discontinued copy)

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