Good grief how could you kill Torren, dear author? why, why, why? 😭😭😭😭😭
oh lord this novel feels like it's going to derailed. has the author gotten tired?
Girl... another woman keep asking about your man and you're not suspicious 😒. You deserve a beating
why has no one made a connection that Frank said he looks like her father and think along the line that they are siblings and possible twins being the same age.
Novel has potential if is different not following the norms of shifter/werewolf novels for sure, especially since the alpha does not seem to be able to tell other shifters around him or that she is his mate for certain. Started it due to it popping up as a free read. I was liking it but there is a few issues such as the same chapter repeating back to back 3 to 4 times then add in the POV and it's like reading the chapter on repeat again base on how the POV is written basically a repeat of the chapter. Thankfully it was during a free read or I'd be mightly ticked off wasting coins unlocking the same chapter 3 to 4 times. The novel has potential but does not seems like the author has the time to focus so these issues don't keep repeating and to update as regular. Again I think this could be a really good read when the author has time to focus and the tech issues are resolved. Did read up to 43 chapters which is all the posted chapters for now. I don't think this should have been on a free read either when it's no where near complete that's what trial reads should be for but I was glad it was since it had some issues that would have made me given it a really bad review but I see the potential for a really good novel if the author can resolve the tech issues and perhaps change the POV so it's not like rereading the prior chapter. Good luck
I was liking the novel plot but I'm a bit pit off by the chapters repeating and now the recap from the point of view is no different from the chapters being repeated for me personally. I would have love to stick with this bit I don't think I will. I continue because it's a free read that brought it to me crossing path with it otherwise I would not have gone this far due to the things i mention prior but I will see if anything change in the next couple chapters to change my mind to continue after the free read. Author the story is interesting I am just bored with the stuff I mentioned.
what the heck? another repeat of this chapter
this is the 3rd time this chapter was posted
why are the chapters being repeated?
what's the use of giving him back his power if he knew he was going to die and why have him take the poison knowingly?
VAMPIRES BRIDE
Fantasy · Rita_Chioma_9038