Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! lol had to make enough characters xD
well, it's the kind of *Simple and enjoyable* novel. So far not much of the world is introduced but the pace is good and no cliches (Chapter 10), Looking forward for the future chapters. Good job author.
Please fix the grammar and punctuation ... all I've read was the first chapter and almost every paragraph has a mistake in it. it leaves a bad first impression so work on that while updating cause i like the idea of the story and I'd like to read more.
Honestly, I'm very annoyed by the info and flashbacks in the middle of the fight, i mean he could think all those while escaping not in the middle of the fight then get surprised by stuff happening x.x
'If this guy is at this level, then I have to move quickly, otherwise, my death is certain." Lyle told himself as focused on the young duke whose expression had changed once again.
Rise of the Blood Sovereign
Fantasy · TheReign
كل سنه و انت طيب يسط xD
Guess who just turned 28! Should I be worried?
Dragonborn Saga
Video Games · El_Don
Don't stop writing this novel please, Your writing style is good even tho it's not an original but as ur first story i give you 5/5 thumps up man just for the original power up theme
This book has been deleted.
A very interesting concept tbh , but it's weird talking about the past and the present like we already know about his past and it was never mentioned her recarniated or something in the very beginning. + GOD DAMN HE TALKS TO HIMSELF MUCH , SO MUCH INNER MONOLOUGE sheesh. so far i read up to chapter 22 and the way things are going he's like one rank behind the stongest beings ? just without a back up lol
Well , It's fulfilling , The character growth and changes are just amazing , the world is still not so clear until now but so far so good , the writing still is also good which is a relief lol
Is it a good novel tho ? i have it on book marks but the comments were not positive
[Indomitable Will - PASSIVE - LV MAX -
MARVEL: GAMER PATH
Movies · CORNBRINGER
Blessed land this !!! BLESSED LAND THAT IN THE BLESSED LAND TOO MUCH BLESSED LANDS IN ONE SENTENCE !!!!!! Very horrible. the idea is good if only it was translated in a good way
Global Blessed Land: I Can Add Attributes On The Buildings
Eastern · Pond Fish In October