Shadowy_Night_Wolf

First off, thank you very much for the author who made this novel! I like the way how the novel is mixed yet balanced, with both realism and the power of coincidences and luck (Alizeh meeting a well-known actor, Macmillan, and wasn't taken advantaged off and then getting a well deserved job through him). Though, I was hoping to see Alizeh and Layla interacting more like scenes of them having dates, getting to know each other, falling in love with the little things, and the likes. It was more of a one-sided sneak peek relationship given we don't know much about Layla yet we know so much about Ali. Kiara is a cutie, by the way. Overall, it's a great novel!

Before anything else, I'd like to thank the author for bringing this work of art to life! Thank you very much for your hardwork! There was some grammatical errors in the first few chapters but it didn't affect the story which I'm thankful for. The story development is both fast paced and not. Fast paced in terms of the fighting scenes but slow paced when it comes to the emotional side of things. Character built wise, the conflicting emotions of Raven / Ash was understandable given everything she's been through but it got slightly annoying at some point. And I agree with Dagne / Dags that Sage doesn't deserve someone like Raven. I was hoping Amara / Lucifer / Cypher would eventually drop her cold demeanor towards Raven and be honest with her feelings. But when Amara did so, it was already too late. This made me love and hate Amara's character for being "human." I feel the same way with her twin sister, Angelica / Lydia however, that's mainly because of Lydia's manipulative tendencies. The ending was painfully predictable but I'm still glad that everyone had their happy ever after ending despite all that chaos.

First of all, many thanks to the author who brought this awesome, funny, intense, and heartwarming novel to life. I loved how the characters are designed, especially Neve, Erin, and Tamira. Though most of it is fantasy, the real life trauma seen in the background was overwhelming. In the end of the novel, I was somewhat expecting a 10 year gap to see if Neve's plan worked out. But reading Vee and Mary's story got me interested on how things will go down during the Final Challenge. I hope maybe there'll be a sequel for the two new main characters? Maybe a short background story will do to explain how and why Vee decided to throw her life away despite still having her family and son around.