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I loooooooooooove this book. For those that are yet to read, be ready to be wowed
The idea is promising but a few touches need to be made. 1. More paragraphs: Few paragraphs make the work a little overbearing to read so please give paragraphs at most after three to four sentences. 2. Spacing: At the end of certain sentences, there are no spaces giving no difference between the end of a sentence and the beginning of another. Overall, the plot is nice but it needs some editing. Keep up the good work by the way. Writing isn't easy
Thank you for reading. I'll work on it.
She fought the drugs for some minutes, but the drugs eventually won and she slept. A second later, she feels a sharp pain around her wrist, and she whines, then opens her eyes only to be met with fiery black eyes that she has come to know over the years.
Urban · Crown_S_H
I apologize. I'm in school and it's difficult to meet up with writing and school activities
Thank you for reading
Nice work Already added to collection Keep up the good work
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The synopsis is quite captivating and I love the plot
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Urban · Crown_S_H