for some reason this part in the story sounds pretty similar to a part in another story.
This book has been deleted.
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
Has anyone seen anything else by this author?
Great story is there anymore of this story I'm hooked now!!
it's been a great novel so far please keep up the chapters it's getting better with each new world Kane travels to.
you keep using he and him for her please check spelling.
instead of saying to take a rest just say to rest.
Time continued to pass, and soon night arrived. The driver stopped the van in a good area to spend the night and take some rest after what happened earlier.
Necromancer Of The Shadows
Fantasy · Zero_writer
🤣 I love it
Lux Von Kaizer's Weakness - Donald Tramp
Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate
Fantasy · Elyon
to make it easier on writing you can leave out properly most of the time and it still sounds good most of the time it sounds a little better just sharing some thoughts. so far great read.
why not use their faction chat like Colin did earlier in the story to gather all members before the beast tide?
Jayce flicked through the messages, his eyes turning dull. 'That baldy is such a clingy bastard.' he remarked inwardly. To be fair, he probably should have messaged Dion as soon as he could, however there were more pressing matters at the time.
Chef in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · leeroycgna