Break it down omg. Would be easier to read
The noise level was low, the conversations little more than whispers, but Aeron strained his ears, hoping to catch something, anything that might guide his next move. A barmaid approached his table, catching him off guard. She was young, likely in her early twenties, with dark, cascading hair that framed a face far more beautiful than the rest of the women he had seen in this place. Her eyes were sharp, holding a mischievous glint, and her full lips curved into a playful smile as she set a mug of what seemed like ale before him. "Here you go, handsome," she cooed, lilting her voice with a teasing tone. Aeron glanced down at the mug, its sour smell making him grimace. A shiver ran down his spine at a waft of the brew, a mixture of something unpleasant and stale. "What in the fuck is this?" he muttered to himself before looking back up at the barmaid.
Anime & Comics · FrenzyAren
Raven smirked faintly, turning to leave. She took a few steps before glancing over her shoulder, her violet eyes gleaming with something unreadable. "You know," she said, her voice softer but still deliberate, "if you're strong enough, you could even join us."
Anime & Comics · FrenzyAren
You naturally have a pleasant smell, even your sweat smells nice.
Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
And tone down with the AI use. It’s a chore to read this
Margaery halted, and her eyes widened briefly before narrowing as she glanced from Olenna to me. I felt a prickle of surprise myself, and I spoke up before she had to. "Uh, Lady Olenna? We didn't talk about this."
TV · Master4thWall
What the hell is going on with the story. Dude is pathetic
Margaery halted, and her eyes widened briefly before narrowing as she glanced from Olenna to me. I felt a prickle of surprise myself, and I spoke up before she had to. "Uh, Lady Olenna? We didn't talk about this."
TV · Master4thWall
I was feeling more powerful than ever. It was a good feeling. Soon, I should become the strongest human in the world. But until then, I had to remain cautious and careful. Super skilled warriors like Oberyn Martell still posed a threat to me, enough to perhaps kill me.
TV · Master4thWall
[11] Princess Arianne Martell
TV · Master4thWall
Not only u fcked this up with the ai use, u also ruined the story. Amazing
Arthur flexed his fingers, feeling the power thrumming beneath his skin. "Raven, now im ready to work with you guys, not officially joining, so I'm not taking any sort of test or blood sample or whatever Robin asks, i just need to fight you see." he admitted, inspecting the cryptic key that had appeared in his hand. The system refused to reveal its purpose yet. "if your offer still stands, that is."
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Raven smirked faintly, turning to leave. She took a few steps before glancing over her shoulder, her violet eyes gleaming with something unreadable. "You know," she said, her voice softer but still deliberate, "if you're strong enough, you could even join us."
Anime & Comics · FrenzyAren
You can see the reviews. It’s shit rn. I suggest a rewrite but it’s your book ig.
Solo Leveling in Westeros
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