Jaguar_129

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2020-12-21 Joined Germany
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Jaguar_129
Jaguar_129
Jaguar_129
3 years ago
Commented

Toya is Dabi. This is correct

Jaguar_129
Jaguar_129
3 years ago
Commented

True ! I like it. ^^

If Sasuke had known what his brother thought he would have said: "How the hell is this normal? You're a damn half Yandere and half kuudere Brocom. Just don't project your stuff on me." But to his bad luck, Sasuke didn't know...

I reborn as Sasuke with Smartphone

I reborn as Sasuke with Smartphone

Anime & Comics · KuroBastard69

Jaguar_129
Jaguar_129
Jaguar_129
3 years ago
Commented

yes pls

Jaguar_129
Jaguar_129
3 years ago
Commented

something like that ... I don't think you have to mark it, so only if the ACT itself happens xD But it is just my opinion ^^

---End of minor lemon--- (Should I mark scenes like this? I don't really know if it counts as lemon)

Overlord: Rebirth

Overlord: Rebirth

Anime & Comics · Man_0f_Culture

Jaguar_129
Jaguar_129
3 years ago
Commented

+

Jaguar_129
Jaguar_129
3 years ago
Commented

It is okey but i hope you use " ..." if you ad the description of what happen beside the conversation like He go to the bedroom. It is better to read but it is your writing style. Wait for the next chapter ^^

Jaguar_129
Jaguar_129
3 years ago
Commented

REALLLY GOOOD ^^ Keep going, it is interesting and i wait for more ^^

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