You broke the 3rd wall
Hope u don’t give up on it again. Last one was pretty good from as far as I remember it was unique for sure
Just gonna warn regarding death mage it is very fd up and depressing 10/10 would not read start again it’s got most “dark” things u can think of and one of the worst things is he’s basically being continuously cycled. But yeah if u exclude all that it is a great book got a bit of everything mainly focussed on country building and mc getting op as fk.
This is good so far I have saved it for when u add more chspters
You have forgotten about time a lot of authors give up books cause of work/sleep schedules not giving them enough time to be productive. Part of why some have slower update rates shouldn’t really complain about that they probably put most their free time into writing it / researching and the quality doesn’t usually drop just less often uploads
Good so far
Read not written f**king autocorrect
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Anime & Comics · Jovami6729
By what I’ve written so far I believe full metal alchemist fits more and will improve them all round. Personally would like to see what u would do with fairtail but objectively full metal alchemist is the better choice how the f**k can they survive against some of the people in that guild they r way to weak especially if only 2 members
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Anime & Comics · Jovami6729
Lovecraft would be funny as f**k, yes I know you have already chosen just making a statement.
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Anime & Comics · Biggubosu
Overall was a near professionally done story some aspects felt exaggerated and unrealistic but isn't that what makes something fiction at the end of the day, I thoroughly enjoyed it and couldn't stop reading until I finished it
Behind The Screen!
Realistic · Unmasked63