Badges 27
Moments 206
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feels dragged out
mitch_mitch40
while I like this story there's to much detail and not alot of story
mitch_mitch40
fight feels dragged out pointlessly
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chapter felt kinda pointless
mitch_mitch40
A bit to much build up good otherwise
mitch_mitch40
kinda feels like the mc is unimportant
mitch_mitch40
doing the whole game is geting kinda boring
mitch_mitch40
to long
mitch_mitch40
while good the arc feels way to long
this story needs some actual story in it
Rage against the heavens (PJO SI as a human with the inspired Forge)
Book&Literature · allen1996