Much obliged. Also made me question my memory. I could've sworn 'ting' was also an all-inclusive word meaning something like people, objects and things existing, both alive and not. I think I made that up somehow.
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Nana's Journey
Fantasy · Immortal_Orca
Thank, fixed. Don't know how to do emotes, but- (thumbs up)
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Fantasy · Immortal_Orca
Remembered now that I could've sworn I missed something, and I was right. Regarding her age, she is physically 16 at the moment, however, she's only technically been alive for 12 years because of her 'spawning' on the cusp of graduating from 'toddlerhood' which I consider to be at the age of 4. Her mental age on the other hand is a bit weird since I never planned to have Nana become a 'human' through and through despite not bringing it up in the story. A part of her race might be human but her mind decidedly is not. Another reason I'm skewy on romance and such.
She both towered over most of the Players present, he could only spot one guy who could somewhat rival her in height but even that was just in comparison to everyone else, and her size only highlighted her generous curves along with her muscular physique further.
Nana's Journey
Fantasy · Immortal_Orca
I want to at some point, but I don't know when or even if I will. I guess it's tentatively dropped at this point, unfortunately. For a more in-depth answer, I replied to a similar question in chapter 10's comments.
Mostly. In the picture I don't get the feeling that the girl is as tall as I imagine Nana to be, but it's essentially that, a bit curvier in the hips, slighty more muscular and more toned/jacked overall. Don't know if I conveyed her bodily proportions in terms of height and width enough outside of brief descriptions, but in my head I picture Murasakibara from Kuroko no Basket, only slightly taller, as a reference for her general mannerisms.
She both towered over most of the Players present, he could only spot one guy who could somewhat rival her in height but even that was just in comparison to everyone else, and her size only highlighted her generous curves along with her muscular physique further.
Nana's Journey
Fantasy · Immortal_Orca
Back when I wrote the prologue I hadn't yet decided on a grading system, only did when I needed it really, so I'm not sure if I should go back and change it a bit or have 'Special' grade items be a thing for unspecified items you can't really categorize. The Companion Crystal for example, if Trogal had decided not to go the route he did with Nana i.e weak but with potential, a fairly strong being would've popped out instead. So the question is, would it then be a Rare, Epic or Legendary seeing as it's effect could vary to such an extent.
He only knew of Common, Uncommon, Rare, Epic and then Legendary, but apparently there was Ancient above it as well.
Nana's Journey
Fantasy · Immortal_Orca
Actually didn't think about that, don't know if I'll do anything plot relevant with it or just say it runs on some sort of ultra battery I never bothered to show her changing and be done with it.
Nana remembered Jonah's reminder as she laid down after scanning in the game into her old VR Visor which she hadn't yet parted with.
Nana's Journey
Fantasy · Immortal_Orca
Oh, it took a second until it clicked. "It" wasn't developed by the same company/people that developed VR which is why she had to go get "it" herself. If you see anything else that stands out feel free to point it out! Also made me happy someone liked the story enough for a re-read despite the haphazardness of most of it. :)
Fortunately there was nothing sketchy in the contract being pretty straightforward actually, without all the fancy words it could basically be summed up to: Don't let anyone else use the vr device and do as many ridiculous physical feats as possible upon entering the vr world. Which was pretty much it, the rest being the benefits she would receive, one of them being an exclusive beta-access to all the games they may create in the future.
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original Nana's Journey
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Disclaimer: I actually don't think this is a good story. At all. I have no pacing in mind writing this and haven't done anything to make it pleasurable to read other than correcting the grammar mistakes I see either. Rather than a story, it's me solidifying my thoughts onto paper. I don't even have a coherent plot in mind, just incorporating ideas I find interesting or likeable. I'm kinda just posting it here because I'm paranoid I'll lose it somehow since one of my hard drives fried not too long ago. Born from a mysterious item and promptly chucked into another world due to the circumstances, watch as a very special being slowly explores the world around her at her own pace while also pursuing whatever strikes her fancy. Additional tags I couldn't add: Videogame, Adventure, Pacing? What's that? --- Author Note: Unsure about romance but if I do decide to add it, it will be yuri which is why I added the tag. It will either be no romance or yuri. I think the cover picture is Leona Heidern, not sure.24 Chs 506 Collections
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DxD: Mechanic's Scrapyard
4.72
A street rat with an uncanny affinity for machines reincarnates into a world he, now she, has no knowledge of. Being a child again in the wrong gender at that was a bit weird, but that was nothing compared to finding out what sort of beings she was now living amongst. She shrugged her shoulders "Well as long as they don't mess with my scrapyard." --- Author Note: Just a disclaimer for those who don't like OP MC's, she will be pretty OP and I don't really like situations where stories forces the MC to go against someone they literally have no chance of winning against. For those curious about Romance? I don't know, pretty much nothing is planned, however if I do decide to try, the love interest will also be female. The Cover picture is Jona from Alchemy Stars.41 Chs 5.2k Collections
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A Monstrous Wendigo Contracted by a Reincarnator
A newborn Wendigo, the last of his race wakes up in a cave. Contrary to others of his race however he was born a bit... different. Where his kin was [Frail], he was [Resilient]. Where his kin was [Small], he was [Giant]. Where his kin was [Weak]... he was [Strong]. Being bigger and stronger than others however did not mean he inherited nothing. With a mind so strong no one could access, and a body so tough he did not register most things he was a [Juggernaut]. He eventually meets a reincarnator who offers adventures in various worlds in exchange for contracting to them as a familiar, however... Is it really bound at all? How long can they entertain the beast enough to stay docile? Is the world ready...? [Hello potential reader, just a few disclaimers before you read. First off, I'm going into this with nothing planned out so I'm not sure how this will progress if at all. Secondly, I have no prior experience in writing so if sentences are structured weirdly or the grammar is subpar, sorry for that. And thirdly, this is literally the equivalent of an 'impulse buy' in story form, so don't expect a stellar near flawless story, this is just something I've been wanting to try for a while as I've read alot of fanfics, no idea how this is gonna go. Also some things that will NOT be included in this story: The MC or anyone close to the MC being mind controlled/possessed. NTR (honestly undecided if romance will even be a thing as I want the mc to stay in monster form). The MC will probably also have a pretty smooth journey as he will probably be pretty OP so if you don't like that... sorry. PS. This is probably pretty obvious but I own nothing of what I write... except the MC I guess? If you see anything you recognize I probably don't own it, thank you!5 Chs 240 Collections
A story. I almost wanted to make another fanfic but I don't feel like I know any series well enough to write about and not leave massive glaring plotholes.
-Also getting started on another story so either I'll alternate between these two or temporarily pause this one for a bit, haven't decided just yet.
Nana's Journey
Fantasy · Immortal_Orca