Majestical_potato

Majestical_potato

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2020-12-07 Joined India
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Majestical_potato
Majestical_potato
1 months ago
Posted

author. The first ch itself contains multiple povs - first person, third person, which makes no sense. Honestly, it is tiring to read chapter 1 itself. Please try to change it 🙂

Majestical_potato
Majestical_potato
1 months ago
Posted

I really don't like his subservient character. Don't be pushed around by others, if you have the power to do so.

Majestical_potato
Majestical_potato
1 months ago
Replied to Caedus_Aldric

I left the book after this

Majestical_potato
Majestical_potato
1 months ago
Posted

Well, the character scenes had no real meaning. Disappointed with this book 🫠

Majestical_potato
Majestical_potato
1 months ago
Commented

sighv sigh

Majestical_potato
Majestical_potato
2 months ago
Replied to GOD_CREATOR

Exactly 💯

"Got it, got it, Lin Su, big brother, don't worry—I'll share, one for each person!" Tongtong nodded obediently and scampered off towards the children's yard.

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Fantasy · Book shortage forced to write a book

Majestical_potato
Majestical_potato
2 months ago
Replied to Ifeanyi_Isiekwena

Well noob 😌

"Got it, got it, Lin Su, big brother, don't worry—I'll share, one for each person!" Tongtong nodded obediently and scampered off towards the children's yard.

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Majestical_potato
Majestical_potato
2 months ago
Commented

tf

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Majestical_potato
Majestical_potato
4 months ago
Commented

Author, the chapter is misplaced !!!!

Majestical_potato
Majestical_potato
4 months ago
Replied to SilentSorcerer

Birth of the demonic sword 👍