I honestly don't think Erin is all that necessary, and these people are seriously underestimating quinn, like even at 16 he was a powerhouse capable of recking multiple new gen dalai and after a 1000 years he's amongst the strongest celestial out there, celestial's that have been around for hundreds of thousands of years, the guys potential seems to actually be unlimited which makes sense considering he's desended from Ray who could literally drains thousands of people of their power by simply being in the same room as them, it seems to me like quinn doesn't have a limit on the amount of energy he can hold whether it be ki, blood energy celestial energy or mc cells the last of which we actually know that each individual should have a limit for, I wouldn't be surprised this in 10 years he could fold immorti and the ancient ones together. side note it seems quinn will get a new power up in the form of universal energy, can't wait
nah its more likely that the beast had reached the level of a god slayer and since godslayer powers can't be destroyed only transfered from one person to another the beasts powers will just be tranfered to someone else
has anyone here read my dragon system, if so they should remember Morfan graylash the ansestor of the graylash family who stayed behind in the world in-between earth and the after life to keep the dragons from invading, what if its him
this is disappointing, Andy sangunies, you'd think quinn would be able to make a decent guess when he heard that name
has anyone here read noblesse, this scene was exactly how it looks when the main character Razaiel uses his full power
imagine if your ancestor was a bad influence 9n you🤣
I'll explain more in the later chapters
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original THE LIFE OF A DON
It was a world where strength mattered most a world where in return for protection the mighty were treated as gods, granted anything they wanted without fail where the greatest of them all could bend specific forces of nature as if they were extensions of their bodies conflict ever present and bloodshed plentiful but who would dare complain when tje rewards were worth it it was a world he didnt belong in yet he was there all the same, this is the story of a man who fate, circumstance and a promise thrust him into a position he could neither hate nor love decisions he could neither regret nor look fondly on this is the story of a Don. .................................................................................. Hey everyone this is actually my first book like ever, its a story that has been floating around my head for a while but i could never act on it due to never having a proper tools (the devuce i'm using right now is the keyboard is whack) but i decided to you knoe just do it so please bear with me if some spellings are bad and stuff i'll try my best to inprove the quality over time so yeah thanks for even considering this book and i hope you love it73 Chs 26 Collections
Good day, I noticed some negative comments on the grammar quality on your novel and while I haven't read it myself if you're looking for an editor I'd be glad to offer my services, we can have a trail run where you veto the quality of my work before we discuss any concrete plans