Nobody4

Nobody4

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2020-11-28 Joined Global
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Nobody4
1 years ago
Posted

The premise is interesting and original with him not being aware that there was a literal zombie apocalypse happening. However, I do have a couple of issues. I wish that there was a bit more elaboration in the lead up to him opening up the door, I feel that it made the beginning seem almost rushed (especially as he is supposed to be the "last who knows", I feel that he shouldn't have become aware of the situation for at least a week after it broke out instead of just a day. Also, most importantly, is the lack of the labeled romance. I understand why you left the summary open-ended with who/what was at his door, but it should at least be tagged. I only read the first few chapters, so I can't say much regarding the rest of the story. It isn't really something that I personally like to read, I dislike this type of female lead and how the main character interacts with her in direct confrontation with his established personality, but I wish all the best for the author. Thank you for your work and I know that many will enjoy it.

Nobody4
Nobody4
Nobody4
2 years ago
Commented

If she had to kill so many people, than why is she Apollo's apostle instead of Ares'?

Nobody4
Nobody4
2 years ago
Commented

Who else thinks that this means that "fat leader" is a part of this evil organization?

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