Guys, I have a question. It seems to me that I have already started reading something similar, like experiments with magic are very similar. Isn't this just another stolen work?
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1) MC WILL BE A FEMBOY HIMSELF.
Villain: Femboy maker
Anime & Comics ยท Alex_D_Locke
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I tried, but itโs impossible to read, at about 12-13 chapters the main character will act like a retard, constantly mentioning his stupid waifu, who screwed herself up, then killed herself and now heโs ready to do anything for the sake of resurrection, why just You couldnโt kill her, say that sheโs a lousy person and thatโs it?! why should I read about a moron who wants to resurrect the killer of the girl he loved, and all the authorโs explanations were at the level of โwell, sheโs so cool, she was always there for me, now of course she killed the one I loved, but letโs forget to this, my waifu is just superโ why did you have to spoil the story and act like a retard
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I very rarely write reviews, but this time I have to for two reasons. firstly, because the rating of the work is very small, after all, on this site, any work below 4.6 is usually garbage, although lately it has been more of a lottery, because the rating does not guarantee anything. secondly, this is the whining in some reviews, how stupid everything is, one argues that the main character has achieved little, that if he were in the place of the main character, he would almost have built an empire and collected a harem (Iโm exaggerating a little, but they tell such backward things that it makes your eyes pop), someone says that the story is spoiled by the girl Val, because the main character somehow communicates incorrectly, that he is too soft, although as for me the main character looks at her just like a slightly useful fool running around, from whom there are no problems at all, there were also moronic stories about how the author is building a port in the wrong place, they say that there is a better place, that you just need to open the map and... find out that the review was written by a retarded person, in general the work is good and interesting, the only negative is that it takes a long time to come out.
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it's so funny to read that he won't be able to move underwater, when he just needs to take a regular devil fruit, feed it to anyone, and then kill that person and in the end he will get a fruit that has no downsides
[Friendly note: If the user has eaten a Devil Fruit, he will be able to stay alive in the water even after being submerged, but he won't be able to move.]
One Piece:The Lust System
Anime & Comics ยท Yass_Odyssey
I just want to clarify, because it annoys me a little, although I also admit that the problem may be in my poor knowledge of English. It says that cell degradation is reduced by 500%. If we take the analogy with speed, then when the speed is reduced by 100%, the speed will be equal to 0, but if by 500%, then you will go in the other direction at a speed 4 times higher than your last one. Also, if you increase regeneration by 1000%, it will increase it by 11 times (you have it written 10 times). For example, if you increase something by 100%, we take the original 100%, add new values (100%) and eventually get 200%, which means that the increase was 2 times. By analogy, you should have had 1000+100, eleven times. In general, it would be nice to fix it. If you meant by 500% of cell degradation as having it 5 times slower, then there should have been 80%, which would have meant that it was aging at a rate of 20% of normal, which was 5 times slower.
Harry Potter : Bloodraven
Book&Literature ยท RyanFic