Fenly_Arismaya

Fenly_Arismaya

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2020-11-23 Joined Indonesia
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Fenly_Arismaya
Fenly_Arismaya
2 years ago
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Hi! It's me Fenly Kim! Hey you did a good beginning, babe. But better than you put the title in chapter with a interesting title, not only chapter one. But overall it's good! Keep going!

Fenly_Arismaya
Fenly_Arismaya
2 years ago
Posted

Humhumhum I'm coming!! Hm, this is romance book, right? I think that's story tell about love triangle, so ... it must be excited! And also your sentences and description is pretty good, actually good, but that's little bit much I guess. But overall its exellent! Keep going!

Fenly_Arismaya
Fenly_Arismaya
2 years ago
Replied to Fenly_Arismaya

But overall, that's plot is very good. You did a good sentences. So keep going!!!

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Fenly_Arismaya
Fenly_Arismaya
2 years ago
Posted

Hi this is fenly kim! okay I arrived here and here my review! hehe I already read the blurb, then I was imagine how cute they meet the dragon. Haha. And I very excited when they survive from the villain, that's make me heat beat for waiting next chapter!

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Fenly_Arismaya
Fenly_Arismaya
2 years ago
Replied to Fenly_Arismaya

*typo is everywhere : story

Fenly_Arismaya
Fenly_Arismaya
2 years ago
Posted

This is Kimmy Yamashira. I came to review ur book [img=recommend] Hey, that's book is soooo good. Very intense and myterious. So curious atmosphere in the storu, and actually I love your pretty idea. o keep going!

Fenly_Arismaya
Fenly_Arismaya
2 years ago
Replied to Xue_Yang_1476

yes! hehe

Tapi ... Ternyata ada juga lekuk lain yang tidak cocok, seperti bukan pola yang sesuai. Apa maksudnya?

Crystal Pair

Crystal Pair

Fantasy · Fenly_Arismaya

Fenly_Arismaya
Fenly_Arismaya
2 years ago
Replied to Xue_Yang_1476

Lagipula, itu di daerah yg saljunya lebat banget kak. Biasanya tingginya ampe bermeter2, jadi mobil gak bisa masuk. Harus ada mobil pemecah es yg lewat. Klo pake kereta kuda, atau kadang rusa bertanduk, itu bisa dipecah. Karena mereka kuat

Beberapa menit persiapan telah usai, mereka pun bertemu di titik kumpul. Membawa serta kuda-kuda juga. Meletakkan barang-barang perlengkapan mereka di kereta yang ditarik oleh para kuda itu.

Crystal Pair

Crystal Pair

Fantasy · Fenly_Arismaya

Fenly_Arismaya
Fenly_Arismaya
2 years ago
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oh, ini karena di daerah salju kak. Kereta salju itu masih dipake biasanya, karena lebih strong. Ada beberapa hewan yg bisa memecah es

Beberapa menit persiapan telah usai, mereka pun bertemu di titik kumpul. Membawa serta kuda-kuda juga. Meletakkan barang-barang perlengkapan mereka di kereta yang ditarik oleh para kuda itu.

Crystal Pair

Crystal Pair

Fantasy · Fenly_Arismaya

Fenly_Arismaya
Fenly_Arismaya
2 years ago
Posted

This is Kimmy Yamashira. I told you, I've already read your blurb and chapter one. For the beginning, I think its sooo beautiful words and sentences. This setting place that can make the readers feeling the story for more. I can imagine the characters pain, that's awesome. You did a good job! Keep going! [img=recommend]

  • Crystal Pair (English Version) original

    Crystal Pair (English Version)

    Fantasy REINCARNATION R18 MAGIC SUPERPOWERS POSSESSIVE SWEETLOVE FATEDLOVE DRAMATIC POWERFULCOUPLE SWEET

    5

    Since childhood, Liza knew that she was different. Liza is blessed with a pair of eyes that have a strange ability, which is to see crystals of magical light that are owned by every human in the world. All this time Liza thought the crystal of light didn't mean anything, until one day she was dragged into an unexpected event. Since then Liza got an astonishing fact about the truth of her identity which turned out to be a descendant of the legendary white witch who had lived in medieval times named Adera. It is said that the legendary white witch is a witch who can control the seven chakras in his body to cast magic with certain functions. One of them is the heart chakra, the chakra that functions for love and healing. And thanks to her magical abilities, Liza can heal humans from magical attacks and also help them to find soul mate just by looking at the patterns of magical crystals that she sees. It's like finding and putting together a jigsaw puzzle piece. Then one day, Liza has a desire to find out who her soulmate is using her magical ability. But strangely, Liza still hasn't found it until now. The luck of the mate seemed not on her side. Instead of looking for a partner, Liza is constantly met with Chistone, a mysterious man who has an unreadable crystal pattern. Who is Christone? How can the crystal of the man's soul mate not be read by Liza? Then will Liza find her soul mate? Follow for info and story updates at: @fenlykim

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  • Crystal Pair original

    Crystal Pair

    Fantasy ROMANCE ADVENTURE REINCARNATION R18

    5 Completed

    Sejak kecil, Liza tahu kalau dia berbeda. Liza diberkahi sepasang mata yang memiliki kemampuan aneh, yaitu melihat kristal cahaya gaib yang dimiliki oleh setiap manusia di dunia. Selama ini Liza mengira kristal cahaya itu tidak berarti apa-apa, sampai suatu ketika ia terseret dalam sebuah kejadian tak terduga. Sejak itulah Liza mendapatkan suatu fakta mencengangkan tentang kebenaran jati dirinya yang ternyata adalah seorang keturunan penyihir putih legendaris yang pernah hidup di zaman abad pertengahan bernama Adera. Konon penyihir putih legendaris itu adalah penyihir yang mampu mengendalikan tujuh cakra dalam tubuhnya untuk mengeluarkan sihir dengan fungsi tertentu. Salah satunya adalah cakra jantung, cakra yang berfungsi untuk cinta dan penyembuhan. Dan berkat kemampuan sihir yang dimilikinya, Liza mampu menyembuhkan manusia dari serangan magis dan juga menolong mereka untuk menemukan jodoh sejati hanya dengan melihat pola-pola kristal gaib yang dia lihat. Itu seperti menemukan dan menyatukan jodoh kepingan puzzle. Sampai suatu hari, Liza memiliki keinginan untuk mencari siapa pasangan jiwa menggunakan kemampuan sihirnya itu. Namun anehnya, Liza masih belum menemukannya hingga sekarang. Keberuntungan jodoh seolah tidak berpihak padanya. Alih-alih mencari pasangan, Liza malah dipertemukan terus dengan Chistone, pria misterius yang memiliki pola kristal jodoh yang tidak terbaca. Siapakah sebenarnya Christone? Bagaimana bisa kristal jodoh pria itu tidak bisa terbaca oleh Liza? Lalu apakah nanti Liza bakal menemukan jodohnya? Follow untuk info dan update cerita di : @fenlykim

    235 Chs 298 Collections