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I think you can take out the quest part, but make Smoker realize that he must kill Blackbeard himself. Other than that, this is one of the best One Piece fics I've ever read.
5 - Fairy Tail
Nice cap
Sim
Nice cap
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Prof. McGonagall chuckled and muttered something that suspiciously sounded like 'The joys of youth' which gave Nathan, some flashbacks of a green turtle neck-wearing, bowl-cut fashioned martial arts fighter. Shivering at the thought, Nathan put it out of his mind and exited the Abode, after the Transfiguration teacher.
Book&Literature · OrangePanther
D-C
I really liked what I've read so far, the only big problem being the lack of updates. Improve this, and the book's big problem will be solved.
One Piece: Modern Kingdom Summoner
Fantasy · monkedance