Junior_Sundar

Junior_Sundar

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Courting death... Slowly! TGT Discord Server: https://discord.gg/PKbqtembQJ

2020-11-17 Joined India
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Junior_Sundar
Junior_Sundar
2 days ago
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the imagery here is..... something

He had observed another test subject in the lab, a child named Haruto. If Haruto's chakra extraction speed was like normal urination, then Rinjin's was like having kidney stones - dripping slowly and frustratingly.

Naruto:Immortality and the Eight Inner Gates[Double agent]

Naruto:Immortality and the Eight Inner Gates[Double agent]

Anime & Comics · YueQiu

Junior_Sundar
Junior_Sundar
4 days ago
Commented

it's endearing how innocent his mother is

"My God!" she exclaimed. "That cannon is almost as wide as my waist!"

I Became a Tycoon During World War I: Saving France from the Start

I Became a Tycoon During World War I: Saving France from the Start

Celebrities · Frank10

Junior_Sundar
Junior_Sundar
4 days ago
Commented

you're repeating things. please don't waffle to pad work count

I had a different, inhuman brain with the following adapted biochemistry, metabolism, and instincts, with the added factor that I was a baby, a cub. At least I was the same sex, a blessing that avoided further internal chaos.

Don't Poke The Bear! (Warcraft/Furbolg)

Don't Poke The Bear! (Warcraft/Furbolg)

Video Games · The_Bip_Boop2003

Junior_Sundar
Junior_Sundar
4 days ago
Posted

the translation just gets progressively worse with each chapter. it starts out great, amazing even but around chapter 7 or 8 things start going downhill. then the chapters just turn into massive info dumps that are poorly translated that stop making sense altogether.

Junior_Sundar
Junior_Sundar
18 days ago
Commented

obviously red paint! this Mekboy is absolutely useless replace dis git!

How could he make the engines go faster when they were already running at maximum capacity?

Warhammer: Starting as a Planetary Governor

Warhammer: Starting as a Planetary Governor

Anime & Comics · Zaelum

Junior_Sundar
Junior_Sundar
19 days ago
Commented

so alpha that he named his crew after something he didn't have and had others recognise it

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'Red-Haired' really has red hair, 'Whitebeard' really has a white beard; those are characteristics.

One Piece: Failure’s Road to the Pirate King

One Piece: Failure’s Road to the Pirate King

Anime & Comics · Luxik

Junior_Sundar
Junior_Sundar
19 days ago
Commented

it's Guy or Gai.

"Eh? Didn't you always have that? Senior Garp's last name is Monkey, not Garp. And who is Teacher Kai?" Renetia asked, confused.

One Piece: Failure’s Road to the Pirate King

One Piece: Failure’s Road to the Pirate King

Anime & Comics · Luxik

Junior_Sundar
Junior_Sundar
19 days ago
Commented

hmm idk man sounds kinda racist to me

"A monkey can be called Akin too! If you're not satisfied, go kill all the monkeys. But then you'd be the only monkey in the world, and you wouldn't even be able to find your own kind, you black-skinned monkey!" Renetia shouted.

One Piece: Failure’s Road to the Pirate King

One Piece: Failure’s Road to the Pirate King

Anime & Comics · Luxik

Junior_Sundar
Junior_Sundar
21 days ago
Commented

Francis will never anticipate an Uno reverse like this

Junior_Sundar
Junior_Sundar
26 days ago
Commented

French fries can finally be FROM France

With that, Joseph's potato promotion plan had come to a successful conclusion. Although this year's planting area was limited, it had opened the door for potato cultivation in France. In the coming years, as people saw the high yields from potatoes, more and more would be willing to plant them.

I am the Crown Prince of France

I am the Crown Prince of France

Book&Literature · Johanssen10

  • God of War - Karmic Cycle [AU] original

    God of War - Karmic Cycle [AU]

    Video Games ACTION ADVENTURE TRAGEDY MYTH NO-HAREM

    TLDR What if instead of landing in the realms of Norse Gods, Kratos finds himself stranded within the realms of Hindu Mythology? ___ Summary After his last stand atop Mount Olympus, Kratos believed his bloody saga had finally come to an end. But death has other plans. Awakening in a mysterious, ancient land alive with powerful gods and unfamiliar legends, he finds himself face-to-face with a new pantheon - one as vast and intricate as the one he once tore apart. Without the blinders of vengeance clouding his vision, Kratos is forced to confront himself as never before. Without enemies to chase or grudges to fuel him, he must reckon with the monstrous deeds of his past and question the path that brought him here. Is there still a chance for redemption, even for someone like him? This is a journey of self-discovery, repentance, and growth - a path that might lead Kratos to something he has never known: peace. ___ Author's Note This is an AU (Alternate/Author's Universe) that picks up from where God of War 3 leaves off. Note that the label AU is important as I take some creative liberty when painting certain elements of the Hindu Mythos. The ratio of content that is true to the source material and my interpretation is 90/10. Though I will not deviate significantly from the crux/core of the mythology, I do need some creative leeway to ensure that the "rules" of the universe are robust and free of plot-holes. For more information on this, please read the Preface chapter. ___ FAQ Q: Will Kratos be killing gods? A: Maybe. Q: Will "X" (god or character) make an appearance? A: Maybe. Q: Will "X" (event) take place? A: Maybe. Q: Will there be a harem? A: No.

    12 Chs 43 Collections

  • The Good Teacher original

    The Good Teacher

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE COMEDY WEAKTOSTRONG CULTIVATION TRANSMIGRATION SLICEOFLIFE NO-HAREM

    4.67

    Guy Larks was famous in his original world for his widespread charity work in poverty-stricken and war-torn nations. He was especially known for his efforts in developing schools and educational facilities for children, as well as teaching and nurturing many students. So it was devastating news to learn that he wouldn't live past his 30th year. But he was given a second chance! A new life in another world, as a down-by-the-dumps teaching apprentice in a world of magic and wonder. He was given no cheat, just a Repository of Knowledge holding all the information he could bring with him from his previous life. In this new world, Guy rediscovered his life's true calling! Ride along on Guy's journey as he changes the world one budding mind at a time, as the greatest teacher this world has ever seen! State of Story: - Volume 1 - A Whole New World [COMPLETED][FREE] - Volume 2 - Starting Anew [COMPLETED][LOCKED] - Volume 3 - The Grand Experiment [COMPLETED][LOCKED] - Volume 4 - Birth of the True World Sect [COMPLETED][LOCKED] - Volume 5 - Legacy of the True World Sect [COMPLETED][LOCKED] - Volume 6 - Worlds Beyond [ONGOING][LOCKED] Discord: https://discord.gg/PKbqtembQJ Expected Upload Freq.: 3 Chapters per Week w/ min. 1500 Words per Chapter _______ AUTHOR'S NOTE: This is a slice-of-life-ish story at its core. This is NOT a hot-blooded, high-octane novel filled with conflicts and fights around every corner. If that is the kind of story you are looking for, unfortunately, you will not find it here (at least not in the early chapters). The MC is a modern man, with modern sensibilities. Conflicts are handled civilly, or avoided altogether. There will be fights, but the story does not revolve around it. The MC is mature, and handles relationships tactfully. There will be a slow-burn romance in this story, and ABSOLUTELY NO HAREM. I despise that genre from the bottom of my heart! I also have some LGBTQ+ elements planned for the future (with side characters). English not first language. Writing mistake? Please forgive. Proofread many times before upload, problems not much. If issue, then point out mistake, I correct immediate. I am thank you for you're understanding :) ALSO: I started writing this story with one intention in mind, and that was to act as a parody of existing novels with similar themes. However, around CH25, I realised that my work was becoming too derivative and boring. So I pivoted and decided to make my novel its own thing. I believe that my work has become better because of it. Additional Tags: #LGBTQ+

    459 Chs 5.7k Collections

  • 2450 - Age of Corporations original

    2450 - Age of Corporations

    Sci-fi ACTION ADVENTURE R18 COMEDY MULTIPLELEADS MECHA

    Cover: https://i.imgur.com/GhGrA2d.png ________________________________________________________________ - 400 Years into the future - Humans have ventured beyond the confines of Planet Earth, spreading across the Milky Way Galaxy. Governments and archaic societal structures have all collapsed, and unrestrained capitalism has found firm footing in human civilisation. In this dog-eat-dog society, where value of human life can be assigned a monetary value, we follow our protagonists: - a group of unassuming orphans with a dark secret, - a bastard scion of a massive multi-system corporation, - and a 'garage start-up' comprising of optimistic and starry-eyed inventors setting out in the unforgiving free-market, in their adventures and exploits across the galaxy! ________________________________________________________________ AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hi guys! This novel is just a pet project of mine, to exercise my imagination and vocabulary. The regularity of uploads will depend on how well this catches on (but nonetheless, expect at least 1-2 ch/wk). I proofread my own work before uploading it, so there may be grammatical errors or misused vocabulary. Please let me know in the comments and I'll fix it. I found inspiration for this novel from various sources (Cyberpunk 2077, The Mech Touch, etc.) so in some places you may find some similarities. Please note that it is just an inspiration and I'm not trying to blatantly copy those works. While I do have a general plot line in mind, the various volumes (or arcs) will be quite fluid and susceptible to influence from reader suggestions. This is so that my creativity doesn't stagnate. I hope you guys like my work. If not, please leave reviews! I appreciate any and all constructive criticism, and opportunities to improve myself. RoyalRoad: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/40865/2450-age-of-corporations Scribblehub: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/245649/--age-of-corporations/

    27 Chs 17 Collections

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