Zeravar

Zeravar

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2020-11-09 Joined Global
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Zeravar
1 months ago
Commented

Author, you called the princess by Jiang Cheng's name the hole chapter. Please fix it

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Zeravar
2 months ago
Commented

How has he already forgotten that he read a history book that mentioned the 1st Great King and his forgotten prophecy? It's been less than a week for him and that title isn't easy to forget

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Zeravar
6 months ago
Commented

I may be wrong, but I believe Wu Wudi means "Invincible"

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Zeravar
6 months ago
Commented

Chapters are out of order. pls fix

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Zeravar
11 months ago
Posted

This is basically a much worse version of Creating Artifact Spirits To Be My Wives. Author cuts to new scenes with no warning, has worse writing, and doesn't feel engaging at all

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Zeravar
1 years ago
Commented

"she's not even 21 yet!"it might be a typo but how old is she then?

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Zeravar
1 years ago
Commented

Chapter is basically posted twice. pls fix

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Zeravar
1 years ago
Commented

Why not wear the set from the Sandworm King? We haven't seen anything from this Goblin King set, but he's wearing that instead?

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Zeravar
1 years ago
Posted

The story is interesting, but seems like a knockoff of Black Internet Cafe. Wish the author focused on making actual games and not just transforming movies to games

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Zeravar
1 years ago
Commented

Author seems to be losing track of names in this chapter