Thanks, I haven't noticed.
I have been why a lot to do this week I will publish as soon as I can.
Thanks for the feedback, I see where you are coming from. I just did this with the purpose of setting up some things I had planned for how I want the story to develop in the future. And what I thought of why he turns them so easily is because what he wants is not only him and does around him being Lycans, but to revive the Lycan as the stories told in his old life. So in the future, he will turn other families than MC deemed worthy.
I don't know yet how big I want them to normally be, but they will still grow quite a bit. Every Lycan that is recently turned will have a period of time where his true self will grow.
I saw it as they spend more time trying to not make a lot of noise and get caught, maybe I should have explained it a bit better.
I have not decided what the Starks will do exactly. And about the Dothraki, I already planned on something like that.
That's what I am thinking of doing, but as I don't know have a lot of experience in writing I don't know how I will end up developing it.
Yes, but he will before it all starts he will already have some more experience and strength.
Noticing that the fight wasn't in my favor, I had to turn to my true self. Tackled the guard closest to me to the ground and searched for my target. I run through the door of the room, breaking it. Looked at a frightened young Tommen, looking desperately at me.
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I don't plan on going in that direction, but thanks for the observation.
I think so too, but I'm fairly new to writing, and at the moment of writing this part, and how he addressed him seemed correct. Writing conversations is not my strong point.
"Not at all my lord, I just want to offer you the chance to change your destiny. I know a lot of things, and one of them is that your family doesn't respect you, that you don't have a path in life to follow, and that you are falling into an abyss full of whores and alcohol. I know it's none of my business. But I cannot stand idly as such a talented young man is wasted in a castle that will never truly belong to him." I persuaded so that he knew I was just trying to recruit him.
Game of Thrones: A second chance.
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