Badges 2
Moments 3
It feels rushed
ch 162 Elder Beneil
Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power
Games · Dao_Of_Fiction
I am current reading the early chapters. Around chapter 20 and after, you leave out a lot things. The story becomes really confusing. For example the main character, became a totally different person from chapter 19 to 20(not sure what chapter it was). I feel you did this to rush the story. As you made him into a super motivated individual that is now doing his best from a normal individual. You abandoned all the character development you had on him in the previous chapters. This made me become detached to the MC and I am sure others feel the same. Also you abandoned the village he had and as it hasn't been mentioned for already 20 chapters. This story is a good one, probably going to continue read. However I probably will taking my leave soon if characters development is abandoned again.
ch 162 Elder Beneil
Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power
Games · Dao_Of_Fiction
Around chapter 20 and after, Author leaves out a lot of information. The story becomes really confusing. For example, the main character, became a totally different person from chapter 19 to 20(not sure what chapter it was). I feel you did this to rush the story. As you made him into a super motivated individual that is now doing his best from a normal individual. You abandoned all the character development you had on him in the previous chapters. This story is a good one, probably going to continue read. However I probably will taking my leave soon if characters development is abandoned again.
Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power
Games · Dao_Of_Fiction