Blue_shining_star

Blue_shining_star

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2020-10-16 Joined Global
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Blue_shining_star
3 months ago
Posted

Amazing translation. But you need to work on the card name more. Ex: Yuyu → Mokey Mokey

Blue_shining_star
Blue_shining_star
3 months ago
Posted

One Word: Amazing. Story development, Character development, Character writing, this has all of them done well. keep it up

Blue_shining_star
Blue_shining_star
5 months ago
Replied to LutfiOii

in fairy tail world probably Mira, other worlds? not sure

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Blue_shining_star
5 months ago
Posted

New Review(up to chapter 90): The Good side: The writing is neat, the writing style is well-organized. Each character seems alive and natural, The downside: MC doesn't change anything in the story, he is just an additional character who even enters the plot of the story he doesn't change anything. Slow pace story(like really² slow). Overall in honesty: Start great, then bad, bland, and slow, not recommended.

Blue_shining_star
Blue_shining_star
6 months ago
Posted

I say Amazing, really well done. The book actually improve, writing, story, development, etc. The author incorporating cross worlds items and powers without destroying the Fairy Tail vibes, he really picked and adjusted it well. Biggest thing is... THE CAPTURE IS THICK!! VERY VERY THICK!! Warning: In the first early chapter, sentence made without a comma so bit confusing, but tidied up in the newest(50 so iirc) Chapter. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Blue_shining_star
Blue_shining_star
2 years ago
Commented

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Realizing what it has done, Crystal let go of Marshadow and pulled out its tongue, and rubbed the back of its tiny head, trying to play this off as a mistake.

Journey Towards Greatness

Journey Towards Greatness

Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH

Blue_shining_star
Blue_shining_star
3 years ago
Posted

. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . empty . . emty MT Good translation, just the original author MC a bit too kind that's all ⊂((・▽・))⊃ . . . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . .. . .. .. .

Blue_shining_star
Blue_shining_star
5 years ago
Commented

damn clifhanger! just be something useful and interesting

Blue_shining_star
Blue_shining_star
5 years ago
Replied to TheNut

hack! dose it a vampire sub class

"A ghoul to a Wite, and Leo, a Vampire. I wonder what Layla will turn into?"

My Vampire System

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga

Blue_shining_star
Blue_shining_star
5 years ago
Commented

anything is fine for me,be It sucubus,wendigo, zombie or something just don't trun into sakura's

"A ghoul to a Wite, and Leo, a Vampire. I wonder what Layla will turn into?"

My Vampire System

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga