I’m not too sure why this is such a pressing issue for some readers. This is a walking dead fanfiction and they often follow the storyline closely. I appreciate people taking the time to read it but if they dont want to read about the walking dead tv series then this won’t be the book for them. When putting my writting on the internet I understand that i can’t please everyone. I just don’t understand why people are disappointed that im following the storyline in a fanfiction. Thanks for the review xx
I have a couple changes that my mc goes through. But its is a walking dead fanfiction so i do follow the storyline closely. I wanted to add my own character and thoughts/emotions into the scenes of the walking dead because I love the show so much. Therefore, this story may not be for some people if thats not what they are wanting to read xx
Hello! Thank you for the review and taking the time to read pretty far into it. It is a walking dead fanfiction so I did want to stick fairly close to the script and storyline because I enjoy it so much. I really just wanted to stick a pov from an outside character where you could look inside my brain on how I veiw each oc and what I would feel being in that moment with them. But I totally understand what you are saying and I appreciate the honesty xx
Very fair i often feel the same way! I dont want to spoil anything for my readers but i will say that this book is an extreme slow burn, majority of it is focused on gore and heartbreak. This book does not revolve entirely around romance and i think my steady readers can vouch for that. If you’re ever up for it, feel free to give it another shot xx
"Be nice," Rick responded. "Besides you look more like the stray than her," Rick made a joke which caused Glenn to choke on the water he was drinking and for me to smile in satisfaction.
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I mean it states in my book’s bio that the mc is a female, I’m not to sure why that matters if you are enjoying the book. To each their own though, thank you for giving it a shot! I will say though you are definitely missing out on some exciting twists xx
"Be nice," Rick responded. "Besides you look more like the stray than her," Rick made a joke which caused Glenn to choke on the water he was drinking and for me to smile in satisfaction.
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Book&Literature · kaboo
In the tv show, yes! You’ll have to read to see what happens here xx
Doing that would not garauntee that Ben wouldn’t come back as a walker, which is what they didnt’t want. Also in that moment I don’t think you’d want to push your loved one off a building to save a bullet, you’d just risk it for them. My view on things, Thanks for the comment!
"I need you to do it now," he grabbed my hand and squeezed it, "I don't want to turn into one of them," he said which caused tears to uncontrollably stream down my face. But I nodded as I knew he was in a lot of pain and I couldn't let him turn into the very thing that killed him. "Tell mom and dad I love them," he said as I pulled my gun out of its holder and cried harder. My hands shook as I held it, unable to keep it steady Ben grabbed my hand that was wrapped around the gun and positioned it at his forehead. "You need to win, beat this," was the last thing he said before he nodded his head and pushed my finger down on the trigger.
Stray
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Thank you!! I will be seeing this book through and finishing it xx
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“You lose everyone, that’s just the way it is now. Get use to it.” The new world, where blood and dirt stained your body like it was your favourite perfume. Gore, misery and death is what now comes with the art of survival, everything that you once knew was gone. Scar Jensen, a fighter herself, loses almost everyone she held dear to her heart, that is until she meets an unlikely group of people. Fighting their way to survive in a world where the odds are always against you, love, tragedy and heartbreak was inevitable. Who knew that people so different could become so close when in the face of death?113 Chs 259 Collections
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Into the Dragon's Den
Addilyn Milano, or better known as Dilyn, has finally come of age for the village of Visayas annual Choosing Ceremony. Eleven young kids test their abilities to see if they hold the power within them to enter the prestigious Calayan Academy. With Dilyn not knowing much about her family's past, she holds little faith in herself. Although, what lies ahead of her is much more than she could have ever expected.6 Chs 8 Collections
Thanks! Scar does have her own lines. There are just some lines in the show that are too iconic not to include and in some cases the character who said it is not in the scene, but my oc is. Some people on this site in particular don’t take to my book too well because it is a fanfiction with a female protag. Most disheartening comments about how I write my original character in the series are actually only from men. I just don’t think my pov is what you guys are looking to read. Thank you for the input, but I enjoy what I write and what I have created xx
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Book&Literature · kaboo