Noir_Light_9685

3yr

Posted

I really like the story development and characters. World background looks to be thought out pretty good and described well. One issue with the this story is that the "he" and the "she" get mixed up a lot, frequently during "R-rated" activates. I just binged red this story so I don't know about Stability of Updates or anything like that, sorry.

My Yin turned Yang! (BL)

LGBT+ · Take_the_Moon

Noir_Light_9685

3yr

Commented

I like it (smiles).

ch 0 1 It's just a little drink, but why I turned a man?

My Yin turned Yang! (BL)

LGBT+ · Take_the_Moon

Noir_Light_9685

3yr

Replied to annrubz17

Agreed.

ch 0 1 It's just a little drink, but why I turned a man?

My Yin turned Yang! (BL)

LGBT+ · Take_the_Moon

Noir_Light_9685

3yr

Posted

I am normally picky about what I read but this passed with flying colors. + Bl + Good character development + Good telling of characters' past events + Well written + Entertaining +Background descriptions are pretty well done I don't really see much or any mistakes. Nothing that rightly jumps at me so nope, none of that to tell. I really am enjoying the uniqueness of this story, cross-dressing and all.