Guritno_Dwi

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2020-09-30 Joined Global
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Guritno_Dwi
2 months ago
Posted

The story is good, but the world-switching ruins it, especially when it happens in the middle of the story. The problem is that the first world is just introduced, and then they immediately switch worlds.

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Guritno_Dwi
2 years ago
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Guritno_Dwi
2 years ago
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Guritno_Dwi
2 years ago
Commented

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