Didn't plan on making him that way when I chose the name hahaha
Aye. My willpower was weak too when I wrote this XD
"Oh god." Maya pressed her mouth on her shoulder. She dared not laugh. She recalled a scene from a movie about undercover cops. With strained willpower to respect the man's final words, she bit her lip until it bled.
Slayer: A Song of Spite
Fantasy · theychimirollin
Great job! Celestial beings' interactions with our world always pique my interest. The first chapter was very interesting but as the story went on, and though progressing, it felt a little lost. I hope this comes off as advice to a fellow author but maybe instead of a direct showcase of skills, maybe Liam could be placed in harsher situations where he does learn and use his newfound powers. But maybe that's just me. That said, it was an enjoyable read and it will stay in my collection because I'm curious of Liam's journey and the author's progress as well. You're doing great. Keep it up and keep writing! :)
Aye-oh!
Maya bowed again before she claimed her earnings. The hat was heavy and the coins clinked like rain. But hearing the audience chant out loud, Maya realized her blunder. Away from the crowd's eyes, she turned and shouted at herself, "DAMN IT! I MADE THEM CHANT THAT WOMAN'S NAME!"
Slayer: A Song of Spite
Fantasy · theychimirollin
Thank you! I appreciate the advice and I'll definitely do that! I've been planning to spend a day of proofreading the whole novel soon. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. It means a lot to me. Even I was caught unaware of how much I liked the characters lol. I hope to do my best writing on. Thank you again! :)
Thank you! Really glad you enoyed it, especially the humor. I usually write fantasy but like Maya on foreign land, this is my first story with comedy as a centered genre. I'll do my best to keep both humor and story going. :)
Nakalibre xD
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The Tale of the Strongest
Fantasy · MikruZero
I couldn't resist xD
Was it a trick by the production crew? Was this the audition itself? In any case, she figured the panel of people definitely had their eyes on her. She felt their judgy gaze and how silently expectant they were. This was the trial. It had to be and she had to pull this off with grace and poise. She lifted her head, gently knocked her head with a cat's curl of a fist, and, with a wink, stuck out her tongue, "Teehee!"
Slayer: A Song of Spite
Fantasy · theychimirollin
Great job! I like the pace and how Travia is more understood as the story goes. Maybe proofreading or reading what you've written aloud could help. There's room for improvement on the technical side but there's a lot of potential in the story. Keep it up and keep writing! :)
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original Slayer: A Song of Spite
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Gold Tier winner of WPC #157: Awful singing? Shameless dancing? Rad muscular body? Bad luck? Armed with these traits and countless failed auditions, Maya Yamamoto kept chasing after her idol dream. But Maya's dream of idol stardom wasn't so pure as it would seem. There was one person she hated the most: The grand superstar, Io Hara. And she would do everything to see her self-proclaimed rival's dumb face when she looks at it from the top. Pissed off by the past and into the present where Io Hara had gone missing, Maya auditioned for the new international idol group U-Knighted. Though troubled with Io Hara's sudden absence, she still had a dream worth fighting for. Little did Maya know that it would be an audition like no other. https://ko-fi.com/theychimirollin17 Chs 16 Collections
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Killing Kei: Dark Helmets in a Light Room
Completed
What was above the soil? Fletcher Rowe, a good Fellden boy, often wondered. The Fellden were beings of pale white skin, silver hair, and one with an attunement to darkness. They built their empires beneath the soil by harnessing the power of metals and steam. However, not even their mechanical strengths were enough to win a war. Fletcher and his parents, who all wore the black suits provided for their protection, were seated in a passenger car of a steam-powered train. He was anxious but also excited. This train led to a whole new world with the promise of a better life. Maybe there, where the sun shined, he would find the two things that mattered: a place to call home and a normal life. *This is the 2nd of 4 one-shots before I get to the main story. The 1st is already up and called Killing Kei: Shotgun from the Sky. If you're interested, check it out~ https://ko-fi.com/theychimirollin7 Chs 8 Collections
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Killing Kei: Shotgun from the Sky
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Ghilo was tired of the Hopsch life. The Hopsch, a race of three to four feet tall rabbits, were proud and peaceful in their purpose as Time Keepers. The dangers the current war brought sparked interest but weren't enough to keep him in the safety of the Burrows. He thought the dull life, worse than a wet rag, could kiss his fluffy tuft tail. Wide-eyed on other people's paths through viewing their memories, Ghilo wanted to find his own path. There was an innocent hunger within that made him wonder... Would freedom taste as good as carrots? *This is the 1st of 4 one-shots before I get to the main story. The 2nd is already up and called Killing Kei: Dark Helmets in a Light Room. If you're interested, check it out~ https://ko-fi.com/theychimirollin4 Chs 13 Collections
Awesome work! It's very well-written and the words just take you. The detail and relationships between characters weren't skimped out on. I'm a huge fan of the fight scenes and I've become a fan of the author as well. Kudos and keep it up! :)
City of Vengeance
Action · Easy_Tiger