Alice_A_Kavanaugh

Alice_A_Kavanaugh

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2020-09-23 Joined Cuba
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Alice_A_Kavanaugh
Alice_A_Kavanaugh
4 years ago
Commented

This is the official version and (I hope) this one will have no more changes. A full look.

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Alice_A_Kavanaugh
Alice_A_Kavanaugh
4 years ago
Commented

This is the first sketch of Gary Bynum, the main character of the story. Soon I will be uploading some more detailed sketches that better illustrate the character.

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Alice_A_Kavanaugh
Alice_A_Kavanaugh
4 years ago
Posted

Hello to all who have supported this story and continue to do so. It makes me very happy. I have started to rewrite the story and I am very happy with the result I am getting, so I hope you like it too. I have made some arrangements in the plot that you will notice as I progress and yes, now everything is well organized and planned. Sorry for the inconvenience above :C I hope you enjoy these adventures together with the protagonist and that the events surprise you as much as they surprised me while I was imagining them :D Be patient with the story as it is unfolding. I hope to provide illustrations for you soon for a better understanding. Sincerely, A.A.K

Alice_A_Kavanaugh
Alice_A_Kavanaugh
4 years ago
Posted

From what I have read so far I have to say that I am quite impressed. First of all, the narration is very good and I must say that the personality of the protagonist is very funny and well accomplished. The plot is interesting, the setting catches my attention and the attitude of the protagonist to her reincarnation is really funny. It is a 100% recommended story for those who like an isekai ... different? Totally.

Alice_A_Kavanaugh
Alice_A_Kavanaugh
4 years ago
Posted

The story is quite interesting. It mixes in a fun and attractive way two themes that attract a lot of attention: video games and zombies. It's like ordering a zombie apocalypse at home and not being able to stop until it's finished ... then you ask what's next? It is refreshing and very well built placing us in the video game without any problem. Furthermore the characters are charismatic and reflect a very credible reality.

Alice_A_Kavanaugh
Alice_A_Kavanaugh
4 years ago
Replied to CorwynGentry

Thanks, I'm still working on the title, it's difficult to put a good one on it :(

Alice_A_Kavanaugh
Alice_A_Kavanaugh
4 years ago
Posted

I have read this story it has taken me a bit to assimilate everything ... it is simply fun, original and simple. The protagonist is sent to a fantasy world after a rather irritating goddess slays him, literally with lightning; And that's where we say, what does it have besides a too funny start? Well this protagonist making use of his desire for compensation for ... killing him? he asks the goddess for nothing more and nothing less than a harem of catgirls! It is a funny story that makes us laugh on more than one occasion with crazy situations. Tracking down this perverted guy is 100% recommended.

Alice_A_Kavanaugh
Alice_A_Kavanaugh
4 years ago
Posted

The story has an intriguing beginning, starting with showing every aspect of the protagonist quickly bringing us into context. The narration and description is good, especially to understand what is happening and what the protagonist sees. The statistics are well explained giving a good playing environment. It also has a certain mystery that prompts you to continue reading to discover what happens and who is responsible for the events.

Alice_A_Kavanaugh
Alice_A_Kavanaugh
4 years ago
Replied to Prince_nonchalant

thnks

Alice_A_Kavanaugh
Alice_A_Kavanaugh
4 years ago
Posted

It is a curious and quite original story about a young man who wants to be coveted by all women. It is supported by a system that sticks to him after his death and gives him ways to achieve his goal. For those who like the harem and the R-18 it becomes entertaining and intriguing, wanting to know what will happen to the protagonist and how he will reach his goal.

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    Sci-fi ADVENTURE COMEDY WEAKTOSTRONG

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    I choose you, new connection! Those had been the last words in Grim Franks's speech that morning; right before the First Space Earthquake tore apart Noratris from end to end. Now a cyber paradise in its entirety, Noratris was ruled by the new monster summoning sports game Shoukanjuu, where only those with outstanding performance had the right to live in the great metropolis. The Shoukanjuu had become a way of life imposed by the fierce Nantensou company, the current ambitious and dominating giant of the masses that held a sinister secret in its hands. Willing to expose each of Nantensou's dirty purposes, Gary Bynum, a young man whose aspirations were not far from the word HERO, ventures into the cyber world; however, when a storm of strange proportions destroys part of Noratris' foundations, he is forced to make a trip full of surprises for him that will take him to the deepest and most putrid of the society in which he lives. Forced to fight in the Shoukanjuu as a method of survival, he will find himself involved in the mysteries that Layset brings with him, the monster who unconsciously guides him towards the rebirth of a lost era in its own history.

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    Sci-fi APOCALYPSE

    Completed

    In 2106 scientists in Ireland created an experimental subject who could see into the future; however, the terrible creatures that plague the world make the military base an unstable place. Caleb Jansen will be forced to give his all to fulfill his mission: protect the subject and bring him to the city healthy.

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