Ortheun

male LV 4
2020-09-23 Joined Poland
Badges 6

Moments 77
Ortheun
Ortheun
2 months ago
Commented

The Beast sounds like Erinye.

AN: This chapter was pretty difficult to write, even if I had a blast doing it. The beast's name will be revealed in a later chapter, and it will be recognizable, so that's a small hint. Anyway, I rewrote this three times, trying to get it just right. I don't know if I pulled it off, so, as usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

Ortheun
Ortheun
3 months ago
Commented

*kick

Dale took this chance to quick Duran away, having him collapse against yet another dune.

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Games · Follower_of_Abadom

Ortheun
Ortheun
4 months ago
Commented

*mine

"The pleasure is mind." She replied with a rare smile as she walked to the side

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Games · Follower_of_Abadom

Ortheun
Ortheun
4 months ago
Commented

*Bludger

Flint was the first one to break and cast a hex at Smith, who had his wand ready and batted the spell back with the speed of a bulger… The spell returned back far faster than Flint could react, and he found himself thrown back with boils growing all over his face.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

Ortheun
Ortheun
4 months ago
Commented

* Divining not diving

Roger believes it stems from a Diving ability of some sort supported by other abilities, but confirming its existence is another matter completely.

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Games · Follower_of_Abadom

Ortheun
Ortheun
4 months ago
Commented

*wiping

Ortheun
Ortheun
4 months ago
Commented

*they don't fear death

Ortheun
Ortheun
4 months ago
Commented

screeching, not scorching?

Ortheun
Ortheun
10 months ago
Replied to Marximillan

A bug in the system if anything XD

"I…" Sylthia knew what she had to do, but she was having a real struggle actually doing it. Just a little while ago, when she first met him, she had thought that this guy was just a nobody, even beyond nobody. A primitive person from the outside world. Even after he had shown off his talent in the trial, she had refused to acknowledge it. So what if he's a little athletic and good at combat? He's still a primitive guy who has not received Atlantian education. As for being compared to her? Without a relic, he'd always be an insignificant bug.

HP: The Arcane Thief

HP: The Arcane Thief

Book&Literature · Snollygoster

Ortheun
Ortheun
11 months ago
Commented

Asked probably, not naked XD. And you're missing a dot at the end.

"Hum… I haven't seen you before. Do you play Azimuth?" He naked nonchalantly as he clapped his hands, clearing them of dirt and dust

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Games · Follower_of_Abadom

Report user

Comments
Review Details