Lots of plot holes, but I understand what you mean you're going to make an ex.chapter to cover the holes, I suggest you find an editor for your novel, because of your explanation of the background of the world and The strength is already very good, only in the character and story development, please improve.
Lots of plot holes, but I understand what you mean you're going to make an ex.chapter to cover the holes, I suggest you find an editor for your novel, because of your explanation of the background of the world and The strength is already very good, only in the character and story development, please improve.
Yakuza Lady In Another World
Fantasy · Sir_Kurniawan