1King_Rep1

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1King_Rep1
1King_Rep1
5 months ago
Posted

Needs more background. No idea on the aliens or psychic power. Feels like the author forgot what they were talking about. Then the author started adding their comments about how they need to speed up. They constantly spoil their own work by saying what is happening next. It feels like half their novel got shuffled out of order of events. For free reading ok, but it got too painful to read at chp30

1King_Rep1
1King_Rep1
5 months ago
Posted

The authors notes are longer than the chapters. And they are everywhere. Also locked at chapter 20 before any plot points are decided or created. No reason to want more from the story.

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1King_Rep1
12 months ago
Commented

Half of the next chapter is a repeat of this chapter, save coins or passes and skip it

1King_Rep1
1King_Rep1
1 years ago
Posted

Very slow moving. Less about beast taming and more about generic cultivation it seems

1King_Rep1
1King_Rep1
1 years ago
Commented

This is literally a copy and paste. This novel is terrible

"Increases all attributes by 300? That's so exaggerated! And it can be stacked?! If I consume a dozen of these at once, wouldn't I become invincible? I wonder how many is considered excessive use."

After Becoming a Solo Player, My Unlimited Skills Made Me Invincible

After Becoming a Solo Player, My Unlimited Skills Made Me Invincible

Urban · Traversing Nine Realms

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1King_Rep1
1King_Rep1
1 years ago
Replied to Krish_k

It’s hard to say. He cares about even his enemy so he might never use it on morality

1King_Rep1
1King_Rep1
1 years ago
Replied to UmbrellaNinja

Or was it? Kekekeke

' Chain quest: Kraken menace- link one 

Master of none

Master of none

Fantasy · 1King_Rep1

1King_Rep1
1King_Rep1
1 years ago
Replied to Cadh20000

Pain in the bottom autocorrect thinking it knows better than me when I write

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Spirit Taming

Spirit Taming

Fantasy · 1King_Rep1

1King_Rep1
1King_Rep1
1 years ago
Commented

Maybe a bonus chapter kekekek

  • Master of none original

    Master of none

    Fantasy ADVENTURE SYSTEM SLICEOFLIFE LEVELUP DRAGON RAREBLOODLINE

    4.67 Recently Updated

    Everyone has a system they just need to meet hidden conditions to unlock it. A blacksmith system may unlock after a human walks by a forge. A master mage may unlock a system after attempting to control the mana in their body. Even something as simple as kicking a rock at a bucket can unlock the marksman system a unique system allowing for perfect accuracy. But what happens when someone reaches the age of fifteen and hasn’t unlocked their system? Walker is about to find out, time is ticking and he doesn’t want to live out his life as an ordinary human; he has dreams you know! ****** My first ever story please leave plenty of comments so I can adapt and learn as I write The first chapters may be shorter but the length is improving as I write. Editing is in progress To see recent updates remember to clear que regularly

    2384 Chs 22.1k Collections

  • Spirit Taming original

    Spirit Taming

    Fantasy REINCARNATION R18 SYSTEM MAGIC DARK TRANSMIGRATION BEAST TAMING

    4.6 Completed

    Have a problem where you die too young? Well, Clark had that issue, and lucky for him he was blessed. Clark was reborn right in to a fantasy world of his dreams. Loving parents, amazing future, spectacular partner. No beast? No problem, the system came to his rescue! Or was it too late? Beasts that roam the wilderness, dungeons that spawn from nature, and unique growth plans. All can be achieved if done right. Discover ancient paths and unknown futures. Just remember, not everyone will want to see Clark take power. Some will want what he has while others in power will constantly abuse the weak. This is the way of the world, of the city Clark lives in. Will he take his revenge? Or will he die trying? Don't forget to drop those power stones, leave comments, and eventually drop those golden tickets! This is my entry for Spirity and I can't wait to share it with friends!

    787 Chs 6.4k Collections

  • What The Luck!? original

    What The Luck!?

    Sci-fi COMEDY SUPERPOWERS TRANSMIGRATION SLICEOFLIFE

    4.9

    Asher was always down on his luck, but that is not a surprise seeing that God made his soul with a negative luck value. When Asher's soul returns to God he decided to fix this problem and even give him an upgrade. Asher is thrown in to a new world almost exactly like his previous...almost. Follow Asher as he maneuvers this changed world, no more bullies? Friends? Loving family? Oh, yea, and superpowers! ===============================================

    409 Chs 6.7k Collections