shadow_serpent

10 months ago

Commented

Adrian had 3 forms as well. he has his nethros, his aether and his chaos one

Frey looked around and could see that she was the only one that did not change forms on the regular. One could say that her goddess descent is her form change but it is different compared to what the others are doing. Adrian has two different forms and Levin Cloud has three forms while Peridot can shift from humanoid to dragon form easily.

Omega Summoner

Games · XiaoKongxu

shadow_serpent

1 years ago

Commented

"Forcing the doctor"??

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[VRMMO] Chaos Doctor

Games · Andrzejsaw

shadow_serpent

1 years ago

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*plague

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Games · Andrzejsaw

shadow_serpent

1 years ago

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at the*

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Games · Andrzejsaw

shadow_serpent

1 years ago

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ran*

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Games · Andrzejsaw

shadow_serpent

1 years ago

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hire*

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Games · Andrzejsaw

shadow_serpent

1 years ago

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caught not "catched"

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Games · Andrzejsaw

shadow_serpent

1 years ago

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get not "went"

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Games · Andrzejsaw

shadow_serpent

1 years ago

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"fired" not "fried" and "get" instead of "getting"

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Games · Andrzejsaw

shadow_serpent

1 years ago

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"with" not "win"

Now that she had been cured, he wouldn't need the identity as Ghost anymore. This served its purpose and win the Family head of the Gates family looking for him, it would only be a matter of time before those skilled enough would link him and Ghost together if Ghost were to appear once more.

Taking It All From The Protagonist

Fantasy · Averagewrites