KaiserZX

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KaiserZX
KaiserZX
1 years ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

KaiserZX
KaiserZX
1 years ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

KaiserZX
KaiserZX
1 years ago
Commented

scent 》smell

"It's been a grueling ordeal. My sanity is slipping away. Months seem to have passed like this, shackled within a cage I cannot perceive, I cannot scent. I cannot consume, I cannot respire. I am lost. Just end my misery. Even if death has already claimed me, end me once more and grant me peace."

My Name Is...

My Name Is...

Fantasy · Tengu_San

KaiserZX
KaiserZX
1 years ago
Commented

I think 'Death and Rebirth' is better

Chapter 1: Death and Reborn

My Name Is...

My Name Is...

Fantasy · Tengu_San

KaiserZX
KaiserZX
1 years ago
Commented

you just said (above 30), not (30 or above)

One of the prerequisites for the divine ability's cultivation was to have both the fire and wood spiritual roots, and each had to have an aptitude of 30 points and above.

I Hide And Farm In The World Of Cultivation To Increase My Proficiency

I Hide And Farm In The World Of Cultivation To Increase My Proficiency

Eastern · Flying Fatty

KaiserZX
KaiserZX
1 years ago
Commented

I think you mean Transmigrate instead of Teleport

KaiserZX
KaiserZX
1 years ago
Commented

The lack of punctuation (mainly full stops) is really hindering my reading.

'Even the police don't come here now because it's too irritating, it's a waste of time to trouble this place. Well it's all in the past remembering it won't do me any good' he hesitated but soon continues his trek home, on reaching the front of his little old, one room house, he spotted three people, he had not taken note of them because he was lost in thought if he had, he would've made a run for it.

The World Flipped

The World Flipped

Fantasy · CephasWRITES

KaiserZX
KaiserZX
1 years ago
Commented

Wow. She survived the apocalypse while having a heart disease.

In the game, the female supporting character suffered from serious congenital heart disease and was doted on and protected by her family. She developed an arrogant and overbearing personality and would not give up until she got what she wanted.

I Have a Shop of Infinite Resources

I Have a Shop of Infinite Resources

General · Qiao Zhiyi

KaiserZX
KaiserZX
1 years ago
Commented

Is there a book with a Mary Sue MC? And would anyone read it?

In order to highlight that the female lead was a Mary Sue and the male lead's treatment toward her, the biggest female supporting role became the most miserable control group.

I Have a Shop of Infinite Resources

I Have a Shop of Infinite Resources

General · Qiao Zhiyi

KaiserZX
KaiserZX
1 years ago
Commented

So far, MC material.

After she had successfully escaped, she would come out again after a period of time without fear of death.

I Have a Shop of Infinite Resources

I Have a Shop of Infinite Resources

General · Qiao Zhiyi