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R_S_8046
29 days ago
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not where he left at the beginning....

In an instant, he found himself standing in the same spot in his house where he had first left for the other world. The familiar surroundings greeted him—modern furniture, muted lighting, and the faint hum of the refrigerator in the background.

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

Fantasy · Sit_Down_Son

R_S_8046
R_S_8046
29 days ago
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rescued..... again stupid author

"Elys," Leon said after a moment, his voice barely above a whisper. "You still haven't told me about your past… though if you'd rather keep it to yourself, I'll understand. But I do want to know—how did someone from a noble family end up being sold as a slave to me?"

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

Fantasy · Sit_Down_Son

R_S_8046
R_S_8046
29 days ago
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she said she couldn't .... author is stupid

By the time they sat down to eat, the tension from earlier had all but melted away. Elys placed a bowl in front of him with a faintly smug expression. "See? I told you I could cook."

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

Fantasy · Sit_Down_Son

R_S_8046
R_S_8046
29 days ago
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she couldn't cook at all earlier.

Elys raised an eyebrow, her irritation momentarily replaced by surprise. "You? Help? Are you sure you won't just make things worse?"

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

Fantasy · Sit_Down_Son

R_S_8046
R_S_8046
29 days ago
Commented

so he is a pedophile.... according to the description of her as a girl. not a woman. ya I'm done with this shitty story. doesn't make sense and to much either missing or author is an idiot.

"Better late than never," Leon replied before leaning in, his lips capturing hers in a firm yet gentle kiss.

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

Fantasy · Sit_Down_Son

R_S_8046
R_S_8046
29 days ago
Commented

remember this.... it will not matter later. but the fact she is called a girl. not a woman. you assume she is a child. . . author is bad at keeping story straight and doesn't read or even know what he has written before he/she changes everything so it won't make sense. good luck keeping up. I lost it in chapter 20 something. can't even continue reading this mess. best advice for the author. read what you wrote and if your missing chapters. fix it. it's becoming ridiculous.

He approached one of the cages, his boots crunching softly over the dirt. When he got closer, something caught his eye—a girl. She was sitting in the corner, her hands wrapped around her knees. Her hair was a dull silver that caught a bit of the sunlight, and her sharp blue eyes locked onto him for a moment. Then, just as quickly, she turned her head to the side.

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

Fantasy · Sit_Down_Son

R_S_8046
R_S_8046
29 days ago
Commented

omg is the author even reading what he writes? it was a chair. wood chair. omg.

Leon turned back to the desk, his gaze falling on the transformed items—the diamond and the silver chalice. With a satisfied smile, he tucked them into a drawer, careful to ensure no one would stumble upon them.

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

My SSS-Rank Kingdom-Building System

Fantasy · Sit_Down_Son

R_S_8046
R_S_8046
29 days ago
Commented

what? where is the city and the story coming from? Didn't he save her in the forest and build a village?

R_S_8046
R_S_8046
1 months ago
Commented

new name? or just didn't think to check before?

"Seeing as you don't have a dick, I'm going to assume you're a girl now. I need you to do something for me." Alaric spoke, holding Arthur's head close to his.

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Reincarnated as the Baron's son: My Infinite Card Upgrade System

Fantasy · Rion34

R_S_8046
R_S_8046
1 months ago
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from where did the sudden wealth come from? he had less then 50 after losing 100. and didn't kill many monsters. and even then only very few have crystals... loot from buildings???

Though the others were slightly cheaper, he currently had just over one hundred units of Source Crystal, not enough to even construct the cheapest building.

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