Stan_Parckson

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Stan_Parckson
6 months ago
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I’m sorry if I made it seem to say the story was written by A.I it takes great courage and skill to write something and release it to the world. Having said that I still believe that while the story has an interesting idea. The grammar itself makes the story feel disconnected, the premise of the story is not flushed it with little depth (similar to how an A.I can put forward a prompt but lacks the substance) it felt like you had a first thought but did not continue to build on it but simply tried to make sense of it. Please do not be discouraged by my review I hope that you can take this as critical advice and work towards building greater works

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Stan_Parckson
7 months ago
Posted

It has a cool premise, but the writing is not very good. The story also struggles to make the characters feel alive instead it feels like a story idea written by an AI.

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Stan_Parckson
9 months ago
Posted

I have read this book until chapter 400 and I can say that it is sooooo boring and repetitive. I kept on hoping that something new and interesting would occur but the story has the tendency to just stick in one point without having any world development or proper character development. But if you want I quick read for a few chapters it’s ok I guess. Just don’t spend your coins on this one.

Stan_Parckson
Stan_Parckson
10 months ago
Posted

A great story with lots of potential in the beginning. But the the longer you read the worse it gets. The MC has zero character development and gets worse throughout the story and the world development is just stuck in the one setting for almost all the story.

Stan_Parckson
Stan_Parckson
1 years ago
Posted

Great story with so much potential and has a super fun plot. Only major issue that it has is that the update time for each chapter is pretty long so it’s not worth spending coins for privileged chapters.

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