NovaLuna

NovaLuna

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NovaLuna
NovaLuna
1 years ago
Replied to Vanadhi_Lucia

Thank you for explaining this. I was honestly very confused by how it was worded (attending college before high school).

They eventually entered a college together and successfully ascended to high school.

Serial Player

Serial Player

Horror · Riding Waves To Find The Boat

NovaLuna
NovaLuna
1 years ago
Replied to Lourila

Yes. There was no doubt in my mind about that. It's why his blood is so much more potent than other house leaders. It's not diluted over the years, which is why he can create races that have long since been extinct, or considered to now be "rare". His blood is just as strong as any of the originals blood was.

"Yes, I'm unsure of what the vampire did to me that day. As I said, it was all a blur the minute he looked at me with those red eyes." Arthur replied. "But my bloodline was not considered to be from one of the thirteen. In a way, I was considered a first like them, or at least an artificial first."

My Vampire System

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga

NovaLuna
NovaLuna
1 years ago
Replied to LaoTze

True, but it doesn't change the fact that you can tell this was a rough draft. It's very easy to write the dialogue 1st, then go back through to add in details, description, actions, touch, smells, sounds, etc... I never said it had to be overly wordy. But a good description is essential for a good story. 🙂

NovaLuna
NovaLuna
1 years ago
Commented

R.I.P. Theo!

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I can't wait to see Theobauld again. What will his face look like? Will he scold me again? Or will he smile while listening to my plan?

Raised in Dungeon

Raised in Dungeon

Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence

NovaLuna
NovaLuna
1 years ago
Commented

Typo: "her" face should be "his" face

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Raised in Dungeon

Raised in Dungeon

Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence

NovaLuna
NovaLuna
1 years ago
Replied to Hile_Lawrence

Ooh! That's interesting! I remember seeing that photo of them both showing their crest marking how they were both slaves. Thank you for explaining about the difference of the crest placement! 🙂

'Illska is lucky to move Illska's heart to the stomach. "Or else Illska would have died,' Illska thought.

Raised in Dungeon

Raised in Dungeon

Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence

NovaLuna
NovaLuna
1 years ago
Replied to Hile_Lawrence

Pretty!

NovaLuna
NovaLuna
1 years ago
Replied to Hile_Lawrence

Oh dang. That sucks. I'm sorry! 😢

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Raised in Dungeon

Raised in Dungeon

Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence

NovaLuna
NovaLuna
1 years ago
Commented

I get the feeling as if Allen just learned how to access Reig's Shikai state, here! 🤭😜

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"Dai abare, Reig." He unconsciously mumbled the same word Theobauld and Ottar used to release their armacar's ability. As Allen muttered it, his scarf fused with his right hand, turning into a sword attached to Allen's right hand.

Raised in Dungeon

Raised in Dungeon

Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence

NovaLuna
NovaLuna
1 years ago
Commented

Author: This paragraph is a repeat of the paragraph directly prior to this. Just worded slightly different. I'm assuming you were re-writing the paragraph, and forgot to delete the old paragraph?

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Raised in Dungeon

Raised in Dungeon

Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence

  • Curse of the Rogue Wolf original

    Curse of the Rogue Wolf

    Fantasy MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG WEREWOLF ALPHA

    Werewolves have existed in secret for many generations. Since the time of the first Werewolves to ever exist, there has never been a female Werewolf to have survived their birth. Cursed by a witch, they were unable to produce a female offspring, making them forbidden to be born. If a daughter was ever to be born inside the pack, the curse would activate, not permitting the infant to live. Jasper is the son of the Alpha of the Blood Moon Pack. After shifting for his first time at the age of 16, he was sent to live with his Uncle to undergo survival training. It was then that he met a human girl whom had saved his life early on in his training. As they grew older, their relationship grew closer. Celeste was raised in a quiet house deep in the woods, with two loving parents. Although not blood related, they raised her as if she were their own. She never knew her birth parents growing up. Her mother died during childbirth, and she didn't even know who her father might be. Until she met Jasper, she never knew that Werewolves even existed. She longed to run with Jasper under the moonlight together. But according to Jasper, female Werewolves didn't exist. Until her 19th birthday, when something strange happened. Soon, she would be on the run for her life, as Werewolves from all over would be on the hunt to kill her. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Discord: https://discord.gg/FUczSTp9f6 (A small verification check is required upon joining, as well as agreeing to the server Rules; before you will be able to interact with the rest of the Discord server) ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Disclaimer: I do not own the cover photo. All rights to the photo belong to the original Artist.

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  • Divine Banishment original

    Divine Banishment

    Fantasy DEVIL ANGEL

    When Zyxel was ripped out of Hell and thrown into the Earthly Realm in the modern day, he went into a rage. Fleeing from an Angel who was hunting him. But to survive on Earth, first he would need to find a Sanctuary. Instead, he discovered a human with a strange aura about her. What was it about this girl that made him so drawn to her? Being the daughter of a Priest, Trinity grew up her whole life being religious. She believed in God and always strived to do what was right. So when a certain Demon came into her life, it made her begin to question everything that she knew to be true. Could it possibly be that everything might not be as "black and white" as it appears? Can she accept him for what he is, despite everything she had been taught to believe? When these two meet, both of their lives will be changed forever. And the veil between truth and lies will begin to unravel. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Discord: https://discord.gg/FUczSTp9f6 (A small verification check is required upon joining, as well as agreeing to the server Rules; before you will be able to interact with the rest of the Discord server) ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Disclaimer: I do not own the cover photo. All rights to the photo belong to the original Artist.

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