Yes. There was no doubt in my mind about that. It's why his blood is so much more potent than other house leaders. It's not diluted over the years, which is why he can create races that have long since been extinct, or considered to now be "rare". His blood is just as strong as any of the originals blood was.
"Yes, I'm unsure of what the vampire did to me that day. As I said, it was all a blur the minute he looked at me with those red eyes." Arthur replied. "But my bloodline was not considered to be from one of the thirteen. In a way, I was considered a first like them, or at least an artificial first."
Fantasy · JKSManga
True, but it doesn't change the fact that you can tell this was a rough draft. It's very easy to write the dialogue 1st, then go back through to add in details, description, actions, touch, smells, sounds, etc... I never said it had to be overly wordy. But a good description is essential for a good story. 🙂
R.I.P. Theo!
I can't wait to see Theobauld again. What will his face look like? Will he scold me again? Or will he smile while listening to my plan?
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Typo: "her" face should be "his" face
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Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Ooh! That's interesting! I remember seeing that photo of them both showing their crest marking how they were both slaves. Thank you for explaining about the difference of the crest placement! 🙂
'Illska is lucky to move Illska's heart to the stomach. "Or else Illska would have died,' Illska thought.
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Pretty!
[ILLUSTRATION]
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Oh dang. That sucks. I'm sorry! 😢
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Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
I get the feeling as if Allen just learned how to access Reig's Shikai state, here! 🤭😜
"Dai abare, Reig." He unconsciously mumbled the same word Theobauld and Ottar used to release their armacar's ability. As Allen muttered it, his scarf fused with his right hand, turning into a sword attached to Allen's right hand.
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Author: This paragraph is a repeat of the paragraph directly prior to this. Just worded slightly different. I'm assuming you were re-writing the paragraph, and forgot to delete the old paragraph?
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Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Thank you for explaining this. I was honestly very confused by how it was worded (attending college before high school).
They eventually entered a college together and successfully ascended to high school.
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