witchdr30

witchdr30

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witchdr30
witchdr30
4 days ago
Commented

Spell check and Grammarly

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'Do you believe that he is in the meeting, instead of being with one of the girls from this city?' Her lips curled into an amusing smirk. 'Do you believe that he has stayed faithful when he can get all the woman that he wanted?'

A Mate For The Last Lycan

A Mate For The Last Lycan

Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep

witchdr30
witchdr30
4 days ago
Commented

It’s Nycta NOT Rose! And please get a proof reader or Grammarly.

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Desperation turned into anger and Rose couldn't hold it back any longer. The way Dacre ignored her hurt more than anything. She would rather have him screamed at her, cussed her out or even slapped her, but this silence was terrifying. It killed her slowly.

A Mate For The Last Lycan

A Mate For The Last Lycan

Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep

witchdr30
witchdr30
11 days ago
Commented

Silence Not silent

The silent that followed after that was even more horrible than what happened to Elijah.

A Mate For The Last Lycan

A Mate For The Last Lycan

Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep

witchdr30
witchdr30
11 days ago
Commented

PROOF READ PLEASE

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The beta… agreed to Rhett and the other magic users. Khaos should have completed the beauty blood as soon as possible, but he knew better not to say anything.

A Mate For The Last Lycan

A Mate For The Last Lycan

Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep

witchdr30
witchdr30
11 days ago
Commented

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All the magic users were already there, so did Rhett.

A Mate For The Last Lycan

A Mate For The Last Lycan

Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep

witchdr30
witchdr30
11 days ago
Commented

Take what in three days?? Now it whole words missing from sentences You are ruining a good story due to poor grammar, spelling mistakes, missing words. PLEASE get a Proofreader!

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"I will take my in three days." That was a parting word because Khaos didn't think there was anything else to say, but Rose actually stopped him.

A Mate For The Last Lycan

A Mate For The Last Lycan

Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep

witchdr30
witchdr30
11 days ago
Commented

Tested Not ‘tasted’

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"What about tomorrow?" Elijah tasted the water. He wanted to see if the alpha would refuse to have the ritual in such short amount of time, but to his surprise, he agreed.

A Mate For The Last Lycan

A Mate For The Last Lycan

Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep

witchdr30
witchdr30
11 days ago
Commented

Grammarly

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People was so angry and Dacre relished the moment to announce that Rhett would be the alpha of the pack and people cheered with this news, completely ignoring Silas's dead body that was still hanged on the gallows.

A Mate For The Last Lycan

A Mate For The Last Lycan

Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep

witchdr30
witchdr30
11 days ago
Commented

‘Slander’ not slender!

"Yes," Zuri replied. "It's the best way to slender your name too, because I related to you."

A Mate For The Last Lycan

A Mate For The Last Lycan

Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep

witchdr30
witchdr30
11 days ago
Replied to Sandra_9925

Lost like the grammar 🤣

Woman could be a dangerous creature when their heart filled with jealousy and Rose was not different. She was

A Mate For The Last Lycan

A Mate For The Last Lycan

Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep