Sage_of_Heaven

2yr

Commented

Keep up the great work👌👌👌

ch 41 To act like adult

Last King of Kings

History · xmafian

Sage_of_Heaven

2yr

Commented

Choose Chimchar

ch 28 Auction Part 1

Pokemon: The Medieval Era

Anime & Comics · Wild_Wine

Sage_of_Heaven

2yr

Replied to xmafian

Too bad, but good luck on your endeavor👍👍👍

Last King of Kings

History · xmafian

Sage_of_Heaven

2yr

Replied to xmafian

I am excited because I know that your story would be one of better quality one on that website. Good luck and I might seen your story on Alternative History👍👍👍👍

Last King of Kings

History · xmafian

Sage_of_Heaven

2yr

Posted

I honestly did not expect this kind of historical story to be on this website. I would expect story genre like this to be on website like Alternative History. However you did a phenomenal job and keep up the great work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Last King of Kings

History · xmafian

Sage_of_Heaven

2yr

Replied to Perseus_Oda

Agree you should put this on Alternative History!!!

Last King of Kings

History · xmafian

Sage_of_Heaven

2yr

Replied to Sage_of_Heaven

Also in Alternative History there are people who could help you make map for your story for free.

Tyranny of Steel

History · Zentmeister

Sage_of_Heaven

2yr

Posted

Hello this is a very good story. I have question have you ever thought of posting this story on Alternative History. Since you will gain more reader there. Also here is my suggestion if you decide to post the story there. You should upload one chapter per day to slowly build a reader base instead of uploading the whole story at once.

Tyranny of Steel

History · Zentmeister

Sage_of_Heaven

2yr

Posted

Hello author I really enjoy your story,but I have critique for this story. -The story is very slow pace. Usually this will not be a problem for me,but I have hard time getting through chapter due to how slow it is. -The Romance feel rush. I felt that there should have been more time developing the romance aspect. -Author you have a problem of over explaining the dialogue. This contribute to the story feeling slow and boring for me. Well that all my critique for this if you fix these issue. You will certainly create one of the best or the best One Piece Fanfic that I ever read. But you have to overcome challenges like the Fanfic This Bite. Well who know you might surpass that story someday and became my number one favorite one piece fanfic. Well that all have a wonderful day and good luck.👋👋👋👋

One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]

Anime & Comics · Vostarian

Sage_of_Heaven

2yr

Replied to Vostarian

Also have you thought of uploading this on Fan fiction?

ch 119 Organizing the Council Meeting

One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]

Anime & Comics · Vostarian

Sage_of_Heaven

2yr

Replied to Vostarian

Dude I hope your story get more recognition. The quality is very good.🤞🤞🤞

ch 119 Organizing the Council Meeting

One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]

Anime & Comics · Vostarian

Sage_of_Heaven

2yr

Replied to Courting_Death

Love his free workout plan 😃😃

At the very least, I could change his looks thankfully, except the eyes. They were a bright molten gold colour and couldn't be edited at all. Well whatever. I was always a short, stocky kind of guy so I went with a similar build, only dialed up to eleven. I gave myself quite a lot of bulk, powerful, thick muscles, rippling biceps and chiselled abs. Honestly, I took them up to nearly as high as they could go, none of that lean swimmer build bullshit, and only didn't go further because the aesthetic of the muscles looked best at that point. Swoll as fuck, but not bulging muscles that got so big they looked oddly shaped. Then I increased my height just a couple inches from the same height I am because...well, sometimes it helps to be able to reach the top shelf without having to tip toe. And I finished up with some simple black and shaggily spikey medium length hair..because apparently the only options were various states of long hair or bald. And I don't wanna be bald.