GMKos

Did this guy just say he's the same height as Tsunade? Tsunade, who is 5'3'' or 1.6m tall? This dude is tiny. Smallest man in Konoha, children included.

I like the revamp so far only one correction though, If Caria is west of Westeros then west of Caria is Essos and east of Caria is Westeros.

Butterfly wings go BRRR!

Oh man, Tywin's about to have a bad time.

Dudes luck is truly ass, why teleport to his apartment if he has teleportation tags outside Konoha as well? Now he has to answer questions.

Jesus Christ. Did he roll a nat 1 at birth or something? Surely there's only so many coincidences that can line up? Is the sage trying to get rid of him for denying fate (changing canon)?!

Yeah if he survives this... and doesn't immediately start working on a torturous method of murdering Danzo, I will stop reading. There's no way you give someone this many shots at your life.

Brutal chapter, RIP Hikari, met you once but you were such a lost opportunity for OC development.

Taijutsu and Seals are notably the only things that work against the final boss (the otsutsuki). Jutsu don't work against Nagato either, so again all you're left with is seals and your fists.

Featureless ANBU masks? ROOT? If so, Danzo is being a bit of a cunt. I mean come on! Your 'old friends'' family member is there!